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May 14th, 2002, 09:18 AM
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Pointy Hats Girl
 
Joined: May 2002
Location: The Netherlands
Age: 41
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New Poem
May 10th 2002
Title: You It was the day you finaly came you offerd me an apologie and shame I didn't care anymore, I had forgotten you but no, you had to say more It was not your fault, blame me you said I thought, it's a little late for that! All was said and you told me, I have to go You left me with pain behind and you didin't even know I'll admit, back then, we shure had fun now it's over, said and done Maybe a other time and place then I will give you my hearth and a embrace -x- |
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May 14th, 2002, 10:15 AM
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Cream Puff
 
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Stevens Point, Wisconsin
Age: 40
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Nice job on the poem. I'm not into poetry much because i prefer novel type things(maybe I should start working on mine again), but it was still pretty good.
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May 14th, 2002, 10:35 AM
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Useless Oracle™
 
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Everywhere
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I liked this new poem! I'm so envious of your ability in using rhymes! I cannot use them because in my poems they always sound dumb hehehe
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May 14th, 2002, 04:44 PM
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ys.
 
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom
Age: 42
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nice poem
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May 14th, 2002, 09:27 PM
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Girlfriend of Steel
 
Joined: Feb 2002
Location: Secret!
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Another good poem from Female_Vivi!
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May 15th, 2002, 11:20 AM
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Pointy Hats Girl
Joined: May 2002
Location: The Netherlands
Age: 41
Posts: 72
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Haha, thanx
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May 16th, 2002, 11:48 AM
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EVA 00 Pilot
 
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: NERV
Age: 43
Posts: 2,239
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Very nice Vivi, you write very enjoyable poems
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