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[kamari-ice]

The begining of the otherworld.
The Journey is anew, the world is a different place.
Journey with them, on a journey which no one has ever been on.
It begins.

Otherworld

It starts, a man lays on the top of the blue ocean out of the middle of nowhere.
It is a surprising, others from his world are there too, but they are other places.
He wakes with a gasp. And then says "Huh".
The sun shines, bright high and no clouds around.
He thinks he is just lost, lost in his own world, but that is not true.
What he doesn't know will kick in during his Journey.
He puts his head back down in the water.
Then he hears something in the distance and gets up.
He says "What is that"
Its an airship, but he never seen one in his world, ever.
He says "Am...Am...I in another world"
The airship lands in the air over the water.
Wakka comes out and says "Who are you, nevermind, come here"
Wakka also says "You a summoner"
Tidus says ''No...why?"
Wakks says "Well you walking on water"
Tidus says "No I am not"
Wakka says "You from somewhere else, don't look from around here"
Tidus says "Where am I suppose to get in"
Wakka says "Jump up here, or use the ladder"
Tidus moves into the airship.
Wakka says "I am new here too, I was in my own world when I just appeared here", "weird huh"
Tidus says "From Terra right"
Wakka says "yeah, how'd you know"
Tidus says "I am from there too, thats why I am out in the middle of the ocean
Wakka says "Oceana"
Tidus says "Huh...what"
Wakka says "Thats what they call Ocean here, its not the same as Terra", "But I want to stay here, the green, green land!", "And the blue blue skies"
Tidus says "I mineswell stay here, if I can't go back to Terra"

To be continued!!!!!!!!

[Pu the Owl]

Ah! So this is the first FFX real fan fictions you post here! I was wondering why you didn't write one before!

Keep it up!

[Faile]

without meaning to sound too critical, when telling a story it helps not to begin each line with "He Says" etc . its makes it hard to keep the readers attention .

[Sword 4 Hire]

Hey cool idea...but I was wondering...if Wakka's from another world and was thrown into this one...than how did he come across an airship? maybe you could add where and when he found it?

[kamari-ice]

Thanks, for the replies.
Okay, no he says.
I should add why he is on a airship.
Over the weekend, not enough time over the week.
I found out ya'll replied, cause I went here at school.
I shouldve went here when I was home like between 4pm to 7pm/