It's a song

Cannibal Clown · Jan 27th, 2002, 12:52 PM

I'm not a good song writer. Or a poet. But everything I've been writing lately has been kinda depressing and my friends think i'm suicidal or something. So I've decided to try something a bit different.

The joy I get
When you’re around
Your face, your voice
And all you do

Just me and you
All alone
Could this be real?
A love that’s true.

You are as perfect
And as frail
As you were
Since day of birth.

But I know I’m not
Worthy of you
The greatest creation
Put on this earth.

Life is not worth living, unless my life has you.
But too shy to express, the thoughts in my heart.
So many things to say to the angel of my life,
To confess all my love, where do I have to start?

Let me take you
By the hand
And show you what
Your life could be.

Take that step
Take that chance
And spend the perfect
Night with me.

With you my life
Is like a dream,
The light that captures
All your grace.

Life is not worth living, unless my life has you.
But too shy to express, the thoughts in my heart.
So many things to say to the angel of my life,
To confess all my love, where do I have to start?

It's not about an actual person. I'm not lucky enough to have someone that means that much to me in my life. It's just a couple of words i put on paper.

007_JamesBond · Jan 27th, 2002, 12:58 PM

That is awsome man, nice song. I think that subconciously it is about some one, but anyway. NICE.

Reid · Jan 27th, 2002, 01:15 PM

Good job, that might sound good sung with an acoustic guitar or something?

Or without the second chorus it'd be a good poem.

Soul Angel · Jan 27th, 2002, 01:31 PM

That's a really good song Cannibal!
I think it is about someone and is really well done!

Keep it up

007_JamesBond · Jan 27th, 2002, 01:34 PM

See told you Cannibal we think that it is about someone.

Faile · Jan 27th, 2002, 03:55 PM

its very good .

its ok to feel down somedays . really

MakgSnake · Jan 27th, 2002, 04:19 PM

Well Ive Been Making Alot Of Songs and I Have To Tell U That, ........ This Song Of Ures Can Become A Beautiful "SONG" If Music Is Added To It.!. Its Really Really Nice Cannibal!.! I Didn't Know U Were This Good!.! Trust Me!

IcyMourdor · Jan 29th, 2002, 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by 007_JamesBond
See told you Cannibal we think that it is about someone.

[COLOR=sky blue]Come on, Jeff. You and I both know who he is mentioning so you don't have to bother him. You know how touchy he gets when we talk about it.

Anyways, great song CC. It actually reminded me of someone when I was reading it.[/COLOR]

Cannibal Clown · Jan 30th, 2002, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mourdor

[COLOR=sky blue]You and I both know who he is mentioning so you don't have to bother him.
Anyways, great song CC. It actually reminded me of someone when I was reading it.[/COLOR]

I know who you think I'm talking about and trust me, it's not her. I'm not lucky enough to even have a chance with a relationship with anyone. Yet alone someone like her.

Besides, the song is way too deep and full of heart for it to be about an actual person. And I know she doesn't feel nearly as strongly about me as I do for her. So it's a dead end relationship from the start.

Uchiha Sasuke · Jan 30th, 2002, 10:47 PM

[b]Nice song really it is.But on the topic of writing songs about people.The girl i desire is the inspiration to all my songs/b]

Indrid Cold · Jun 9th, 2002, 09:29 PM

Cool...
But i have no idea what that Song is...

I only know
Most

1.Metal Rock
2.Hard Rock

happy_doughnut · Jun 9th, 2002, 09:35 PM

... That... is beautiful CC. It really is. I would have never imagined you had such great talent! Honestly, that is an extremly well written song. Very sentimental... completely lovely *smiles*

Jan 27th, 2002, 12:52 PM	#1
Cannibal Clown Taijutsu Master Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Konoha Village Age: 38 Posts: 2,129	It's a song I'm not a good song writer. Or a poet. But everything I've been writing lately has been kinda depressing and my friends think i'm suicidal or something. So I've decided to try something a bit different. The joy I get When you’re around Your face, your voice And all you do Just me and you All alone Could this be real? A love that’s true. You are as perfect And as frail As you were Since day of birth. But I know I’m not Worthy of you The greatest creation Put on this earth. Life is not worth living, unless my life has you. But too shy to express, the thoughts in my heart. So many things to say to the angel of my life, To confess all my love, where do I have to start? Let me take you By the hand And show you what Your life could be. Take that step Take that chance And spend the perfect Night with me. With you my life Is like a dream, The light that captures All your grace. Life is not worth living, unless my life has you. But too shy to express, the thoughts in my heart. So many things to say to the angel of my life, To confess all my love, where do I have to start? It's not about an actual person. I'm not lucky enough to have someone that means that much to me in my life. It's just a couple of words i put on paper.

Jan 27th, 2002, 01:31 PM	#4
Soul Angel Senior Member Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Um...? Pulls out map Age: 40 Posts: 1,887	That's a really good song Cannibal! I think it is about someone and is really well done! Keep it up __________________ "I'm back! But for how long who knows? But PS2Fantasy will always be on my mind!"

Jan 27th, 2002, 03:55 PM	#6
Faile ys. Joined: Jan 2002 Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom Age: 40 Posts: 1,137	its very good . its ok to feel down somedays . really __________________ www.catherineandtheowl.com purr. miaow. hiss.

Jan 27th, 2002, 04:19 PM	#7
MakgSnake Senior Member Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Mississuaga, Canada. Posts: 3,554	Wow! Well Ive Been Making Alot Of Songs and I Have To Tell U That, ........ This Song Of Ures Can Become A Beautiful "SONG" If Music Is Added To It.!. Its Really Really Nice Cannibal!.! I Didn't Know U Were This Good!.! Trust Me! __________________

Jan 30th, 2002, 10:47 PM	#10
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Jan 27th, 2002, 12:58 PM	#2
007_JamesBond Angel of Darkness Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere, but then again nowhere Age: 38 Posts: 1,692	That is awsome man, nice song. I think that subconciously it is about some one, but anyway. NICE.

Jan 27th, 2002, 01:15 PM	#3
Reid .red house. Joined: Jan 2002 Location: canada Age: 37 Posts: 797	Good job, that might sound good sung with an acoustic guitar or something? Or without the second chorus it'd be a good poem.

Jan 27th, 2002, 01:34 PM	#5
007_JamesBond Angel of Darkness Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere, but then again nowhere Age: 38 Posts: 1,692	See told you Cannibal we think that it is about someone.

Jun 9th, 2002, 09:29 PM	#11
Indrid Cold Banned Joined: Jun 2002 Location: Zapadocesky Czech Republic Age: 41 Posts: 298	Cool... But i have no idea what that Song is... I only know Most 1.Metal Rock 2.Hard Rock

Jun 9th, 2002, 09:35 PM	#12
happy_doughnut just a rolling stone Joined: Apr 2002 Location: of what? Posts: 1,561	... That... is beautiful CC. It really is. I would have never imagined you had such great talent! Honestly, that is an extremly well written song. Very sentimental... completely lovely smiles

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