Feel like writing...

Sword 4 Hire · Sep 30th, 2002, 08:25 PM

Eh I'm in the mood for a good poem wouldn't you agree? I'm gonna write this poem in less than 3 minutes and I will not go back to edit or nothing. Your about to get a taste for my speed writing in its rawest form...don't be alarmed most of it will not make sense lol

here we go now...

Rekindled flames are worthless
Harmless to the touch
And worthless...no warmth what so ever
Just a recyclin bin of bad memories
That haunt me when I sit my head down on my desk during class
Do I sleep in class you ask?
Of course
Why wouldn't I, when a man needs sleep I sleep!
But not about you nor your pet dog who barked at me quite often
Put that dog to sleep why don't you!
It kinda bothered me and yet was pretty cool
Kujo style I guess
Polaris is on
And I'm jamming
But not to the cash register when I buy a brand new one
I prefer mine new
I prefer mine store bought with the wrapping and price tag still dangling
None of these rekindled flames
I like mine new!

I guess there's a lot on my mind....anyway hope you enjoyed this weeks enstallment of the Sword 4 Hire 3 minute poetry session! See ya next time kids

Black Heart · Oct 2nd, 2002, 05:07 AM

Can't believe nobody commented yet! Maybe it's because they don't check this forum very often! It's a poem with lots of personal feelings, even when it seems more ironic and senseless than the other ones. I have the impression you're talking about a moment of your life. Maybe it's just fiction, I don't know, but I had the impression you're describing this present moment of your life.

Sword 4 Hire · Oct 2nd, 2002, 02:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Black Heart
Can't believe nobody commented yet! Maybe it's because they don't check this forum very often! It's a poem with lots of personal feelings, even when it seems more ironic and senseless than the other ones. I have the impression you're talking about a moment of your life. Maybe it's just fiction, I don't know, but I had the impression you're describing this present moment of your life.

Yeah you could say that there is somethin goin on in my life at the moment. It's actually about a relationship that just ended and I'm saying how it would never work with that person again, I'd rather get into a new and different relationship with someone else than the one I was just in. It didnt quite go to well I guess... But thank you for the comments by the way

Lost_myth · Oct 2nd, 2002, 04:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sword 4 Hire

Yeah you could say that there is somethin goin on in my life at the moment. It's actually about a relationship that just ended and I'm saying how it would never work with that person again, I'd rather get into a new and different relationship with someone else than the one I was just in. It didnt quite go to well I guess... But thank you for the comments by the way

You know what? When I was reading it... that's what I thought it was about. Your relationship ending, closure I guess. It was good.

Sword 4 Hire · Oct 2nd, 2002, 08:22 PM

Thank you

Darkness 4 Hire · Nov 22nd, 2002, 12:54 PM

Nice job, ur getting tooooooo good!

Sep 30th, 2002, 08:25 PM	#1
Sword 4 Hire Retired... Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Swamp hill. Age: 37 Posts: 1,632	Feel like writing... Eh I'm in the mood for a good poem wouldn't you agree? I'm gonna write this poem in less than 3 minutes and I will not go back to edit or nothing. Your about to get a taste for my speed writing in its rawest form...don't be alarmed most of it will not make sense lol here we go now... Rekindled flames are worthless Harmless to the touch And worthless...no warmth what so ever Just a recyclin bin of bad memories That haunt me when I sit my head down on my desk during class Do I sleep in class you ask? Of course Why wouldn't I, when a man needs sleep I sleep! But not about you nor your pet dog who barked at me quite often Put that dog to sleep why don't you! It kinda bothered me and yet was pretty cool Kujo style I guess Polaris is on And I'm jamming But not to the cash register when I buy a brand new one I prefer mine new I prefer mine store bought with the wrapping and price tag still dangling None of these rekindled flames I like mine new! I guess there's a lot on my mind....anyway hope you enjoyed this weeks enstallment of the Sword 4 Hire 3 minute poetry session! See ya next time kids __________________ and for now the tired soldier sheathes his sword...

Oct 2nd, 2002, 08:22 PM	#5
Sword 4 Hire Retired... Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Swamp hill. Age: 37 Posts: 1,632	Thank you __________________ and for now the tired soldier sheathes his sword...

Nov 22nd, 2002, 12:54 PM	#6
Darkness 4 Hire Hero of Darkness Joined: Sep 2002 Location: In between the depths of Time Age: 40 Posts: 122	Nice job, ur getting tooooooo good! __________________

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Feel like writing...

Oct 2nd, 2002, 05:07 AM	#2
Black Heart Mighty Captain Joined: Mar 2002 Location: Nautilus Posts: 273	Can't believe nobody commented yet! Maybe it's because they don't check this forum very often! It's a poem with lots of personal feelings, even when it seems more ironic and senseless than the other ones. I have the impression you're talking about a moment of your life. Maybe it's just fiction, I don't know, but I had the impression you're describing this present moment of your life.


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