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Jan 23rd, 2002, 05:45 PM | #1 |
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a poem for the new forums
self respect exists within principle only
so down and down and down we'll fall again and again and again and its not you its me again depressed and left alone again so one day we can die together hold us still in time aghast we'll deny them all for the first time i'm alone and self absorbed and broken up and ruined and cursed and killed and caught and perhaps i needed you more than you needed me and i've heard all you can ever tell me
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Jan 23rd, 2002, 05:52 PM | #2 |
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That's amazing! As usual!
Very deep and sad, but wonderful! |
Jan 23rd, 2002, 06:11 PM | #3 |
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*wipes away tears*
I have something in my eyes, just a coincerdence thats all. :rolleyes: Oh, nice poem. |
Jan 23rd, 2002, 06:15 PM | #4 |
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Great poem Faile .
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Jan 23rd, 2002, 07:47 PM | #5 |
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Yes, a wonderful poem.
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Jan 23rd, 2002, 07:49 PM | #6 |
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Pretty Neat!
Thats A Pretty Neat Poem There .... ! Very Good!
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Jan 23rd, 2002, 07:58 PM | #7 |
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Great Poem Faile
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Jan 24th, 2002, 06:26 AM | #8 |
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That's a wonderful poem Faile!
I'd like to be able to write something like this, but my head is empty |
Jan 24th, 2002, 12:32 PM | #9 |
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That was nice, thank you for that enlightening piece of poetry, I liked it.
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Jan 24th, 2002, 03:25 PM | #10 |
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Good work, Faile.
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Jan 24th, 2002, 05:32 PM | #11 |
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thankyou for your kind comments-rah
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Jan 24th, 2002, 08:50 PM | #12 |
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Do you have anymore poems, I would like to see them, I will have to post up some of mine.
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Jan 25th, 2002, 04:11 PM | #13 |
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i have quite a few .
but i don't tend to post them, because i don't like them
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Jan 25th, 2002, 04:16 PM | #14 | |
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Quote:
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Jan 25th, 2002, 06:07 PM | #15 |
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then you are too kind
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Jan 25th, 2002, 10:54 PM | #16 |
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But Faile your poems are really good!
You should post more up so we can all read them!
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Jan 26th, 2002, 08:33 AM | #17 |
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Oh Faile!
This is wonderful and moving poem! You're so good at writing them! |
Jan 27th, 2002, 08:37 AM | #18 |
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maybe i shall then . or maybe not . depending on how much i despise them .
i don't know . the occasional line i like . (why is it so hard to explain to people why i have no confidence in what i do) anyway thankyou all . and welcome back to pearl who we all thought had vanished for a while.
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Jan 27th, 2002, 11:16 AM | #19 |
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I am sure that yours are excellent, they are better that than mine, post more please.
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