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Nov 27th, 2002, 04:29 PM | #1 |
Chokyonim
Joined: Nov 2002
Location: Cincy,OH
Age: 37
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"I'm Poor"
I’m Poor 11/26/02
All my life been po’ but it really don’t matter no mo’ cuz my electricity aint on and my water faucet don’t flow, OH NO! I roll outta my bed, water from the roof leaks on my dome I’m sayin’ my shit so tore up, how exactly can I call it home? I roam over to the mirror and practice my sickest voice “Cough cough, hey boss what’s up? I really aint got a choice I can’t come in, I’m sick” is the words I’m gonna say hell if he aint caught on, his bad, it’s everyday in my raggedy ass night shirt, take my ass down the hall to use my neighbor’s phone, how else I’m gonna call? This brotha aint got no cash, the government’s even on me the bill collectors’ hasslin’, “He aint live here, this here is Bobby.” Still go to my momma’s house once a week to do my laundry at night I even here the rats chucklin’ it up “That nigga, he aint shit”, “I heard he likes it up the butt!” I WHAT?!... uh oh, oh... damn, not him again the land lord again, oh Lord not him again I dip out the back window down to the streets below with some jacked up Fikes and some Ron-Johns apparel my narrow, escape, every day I gotta make so broke got candy on layaway, this here’s for money’s sake can’t even afford to pay attention.... what? What was that? Oh yea, my people, yal aint know!? Damn man it aint easy bein po’.... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Just a real stupid poem I wrote cuz Po' Folks by Nappy Roots was floatin around my head, bored in Algebra class... lol my first stab at a poem that is simply for entertainment value... hope it turned out aight... tell me what yal think []D |
Nov 27th, 2002, 04:55 PM | #2 |
Mighty Captain
Joined: Mar 2002
Location: Nautilus
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I liked some rhymes you put here and there, they give a sort of rhythm and and a "beat" to this poem. It's interesting to know that you have wrote in while in Algebra class ahaha it's entertaining for the reader too
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Nov 30th, 2002, 09:09 PM | #3 |
The Cynical Clone
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Lakeview Hotel
Posts: 496
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Weird poem, but if you said it came out while doing Algebra, I can see why it's weird...
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Dec 1st, 2002, 12:40 AM | #4 |
Every One Dies Alone
Joined: May 2002
Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows.
Age: 37
Posts: 1,057
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LMAO dude. Nappy roots, lmao...
Can't say I cared for most of it but yeah.. that part cracked me up
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Dec 1st, 2002, 04:32 AM | #5 |
Chokyonim
Joined: Nov 2002
Location: Cincy,OH
Age: 37
Posts: 113
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Yo thanx for the replies yal.. lol mixed reactions, I guess it was to be expected... this was just a stupid poem, if you go in expecting the usual enlightenment that I bestow I guess that's y it was a let down :-p but seriously, I do all my writing in Algebra class! lol thas where the words flow best, cuz usually my mind is free... damn that class is soooo boring/easy... so I jus chill and scribe a lil somethin... so yea, thank ya again
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Dec 21st, 2002, 07:40 PM | #6 |
free your mind
Joined: Nov 2002
Location: the Matrix
Age: 35
Posts: 327
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awesome poem, u have some talent
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Dec 22nd, 2002, 12:18 AM | #7 |
Chokyonim
Joined: Nov 2002
Location: Cincy,OH
Age: 37
Posts: 113
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thanks alot, that was really just a goof off poem tho... i was bored in algebra so i started writin... officially ive only been writing now for about... 8 months, so im still new to this, i hope to only get better thanx a lot man, appreciate the words
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