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Jul 6th, 2003, 02:14 PM | #1 |
Chokyonim
Joined: Nov 2002
Location: Cincy,OH
Age: 37
Posts: 113
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Enter the Darkness
Night's perils,
light's ferals flee from the canine cloaked in night's apparel, shadow snipers pierce us with darkness arrows, the candle's light my only means of sight when the time is right when the sky of lights dampened by the black of night hampered by the lack of sight the silence is menacing, the good in the world is grimacing while evil runs its course, the luminescence of the moon glimmers praising its source while the stars converse amongst themselves ‘til daylight will leave their voices hoarse. The cool serenity invades my soul with every passing moment- I do my best to channel and hone it; the eve leaves many a being wandering like forsaken ghouls upon this Earth, until the eventual passing of noon which brings rebirth; Darkness may hide numerous dangers that go untold but the beauty of night is surely a sight to behold. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Wrote this 4th of July when my power went out... makes sense now huh? :-p
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Aug 10th, 2003, 06:52 AM | #2 |
Mighty Captain
Joined: Mar 2002
Location: Nautilus
Posts: 273
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Good work in describing the contrast light/darkness. It's really effective, especially thanks to the words you used.
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