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Sep 10th, 2003, 06:33 AM | #1 |
Every One Dies Alone
Joined: May 2002
Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows.
Age: 37
Posts: 1,057
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State Fair
Staring into the saddened sky full of laughter with an irresistible smirk
letting my blues evaporate hanging off the tips of my hair then let go flinging into the air smacking the silver lining making it a painting that'll be glued into the wall of my memory forever young and forever dreaming. Staring into the saddened sky full of awe with an irresistible twinkle in my eye knowing that the sky will turn this shade down the road of happiness and heartbreak and it'll take me away like I am now flying. Staring into the saddened sky full of anguish with an irresistible taste tantalized in a clutch Metal wrapped around me transforming into flesh strong as steel but weaker than the salty rain drops that washed down my nose beyond my sunbitten cheeks of the roses' shade trickling into a bucket that I know now is the only source of nourishment I'll receive at a later date. PSR~
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Oct 6th, 2003, 02:58 PM | #2 |
EVA 00 Pilot
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: NERV
Age: 41
Posts: 2,239
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So, you're posting now and then? I'm glad to read new stuff from you, even if I'm late as usual for comments
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Oct 7th, 2003, 11:02 PM | #3 |
pazparacolombia
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Restless dreams...
Age: 43
Posts: 2,002
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This is one of your best, friend. IMO, that is. I read it a long time ago and I believe I gave you my thoughts on it and what it was about and how I liked the way it flowed with the imagery and everything else. The feeling sounds familiar to me. Being caught in the downward spiral of whatever it is you are fighting against. Depression or whatever it may be, but being used to the taste and needing it. Etc.
Written wonderfully. Keep up the good work _RED_ stuff
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..." |
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