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Sep 8th, 2002, 12:31 PM | #1 |
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We 9-11
We take 2 steps back
We slip We fall into my steep We die We think We wish We pray We hope We know it wont happen We dont pay attention We get hurt We get hurt more than ever We Fight back We win We celebrate We forget About the lives we lost! do you like it? |
Sep 8th, 2002, 10:00 PM | #2 |
Mighty Captain
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Very simple poem, but sincere.
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Sep 8th, 2002, 11:53 PM | #3 |
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pretty good poem i like it good job.
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Sep 14th, 2002, 06:47 PM | #4 |
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I think that it actually sounds pretty good. I was confused at first, but then I read it out loud.
What was the message or the main thought of the poem? I know you are thinking dumbass, it's about september 11. Would you care to explain it more?
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Sep 21st, 2002, 05:35 PM | #5 |
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Its more about, reg people that dont pay attention to what is happening in the world, Some people dont give a flying f*ck what happend! I do and most of us do. All it is saying nobody realizes how much of a flaw it is to loose a human being!
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Sep 22nd, 2002, 04:13 PM | #6 |
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Very Nice
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