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Aug 9th, 2002, 01:12 AM | #1 |
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Deap Short Fast Poem -I made it
In the Darkness we shall pass,
we came together all at last, as we thought to our past, our days would never last, so we passed, to the end we could tell, we were gone with heaven no hell |
Aug 9th, 2002, 01:17 PM | #2 |
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Yo. That's tight. I like that... alot. I'm still thinking about it.
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Aug 9th, 2002, 04:49 PM | #3 |
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I was thinking about people with relationships and abousive ones, where the husbands hit the wive and so on.....
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Aug 9th, 2002, 05:48 PM | #4 |
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I can imagine them saying that as they protested or something. Good job.
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Aug 10th, 2002, 11:15 AM | #5 |
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thanx I think thats the best poem I have ever done, I mean like just thought of it all fast and typed it up
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