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Jul 16th, 2002, 05:39 PM | #1 |
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The Ninja...a poem by yours trully
The Ninja
by: DJ Sword Master Flash What will you do when the Ninja comes? Comes knocking on your door Breaking your sense of solitude Till the silence is no more Will you let it in and befriend it Leaving caution to the wind Or will you lock it out in the cold And never let it in It will be your best friend Making all your problems right And you will trust it for the moment Then let it finish you in the night What will you do when your ninja comes? Will you invite to take its coat? And turn your back for a second’s worth Until there’s a shuriken in your throat…
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Jul 16th, 2002, 05:49 PM | #2 |
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Wow, another amazing poem !
Man, I hafta say, I really like the way you write ! I'm glad you decided to write some more 'cuz it's really great ! I find the comparison to be so true. Well, at least it is to me. Using a Ninja in it was quite clever. *sniffle* Again, very well done . |
Jul 16th, 2002, 06:01 PM | #3 |
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An acrostic poem, KOOL!
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Jul 16th, 2002, 06:41 PM | #4 |
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awsome poem!!!
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Jul 17th, 2002, 12:11 AM | #5 |
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Indeed...
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Jul 17th, 2002, 03:39 PM | #6 |
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Bizarre choice for the subject, but nice work
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Jul 17th, 2002, 06:43 PM | #7 |
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You have to dig deeper into the poem...
...it's not really about a ninja....
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Jul 17th, 2002, 10:59 PM | #8 |
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Seems like a friend that has betrayed you. Don't trust strangers or something. Good meaning. Yes, you did do a good job. Indeed. I'm not saying it just say it either. I really mean it. My favorite is still OMG I wrote a poem tho.
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Jul 18th, 2002, 03:50 AM | #9 |
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Saying bizarre choice for the subject I didn't mean "A real ninja is a strange choice"... maybe you misunderstood the sense of my post. Next time I'll choose more carefully my words.
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Jul 18th, 2002, 04:01 PM | #10 |
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Well Soooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Yes it can be about friendship but I was talkin about love and how usually I'm the one hurt in the end...
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Jul 23rd, 2002, 02:28 PM | #11 |
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That's a really good poem S4H
I liked it, keep it up!
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