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Sep 9th, 2003, 12:04 AM | #1 |
pazparacolombia
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_RED_ stuff (version1.1)
_RED_ stuff
by Redpyramidhead (Mark S.) A twilight in hell magic hour beautiful yet so sour a taste in this mouth as one waits as a raven in the crook of Dis' highest tower with what one is relentlessly told to aspire as one spreads their wings for a downward loop into the absense of air's current, no power the only torrent against thine approach in spirals and downward cycles through cyclopean spire That they are what reach for the forsaken lands' poisened skies What maketh what Thee dare call blasphemous stalagmites of artistic wonder, endless lifetimes to ponder, the meticulously woven heart threads, arterial matter, and the last lamenting parts of soul bound to even the seventh chakra and feeding your hand poisened lies They come every day now sometimes in pairs, thirds, and fourths somehow They search for longevity and what they have been told to be devine and ask for on tap from hell's most grandiose and livid if not vivid gardens the finest red wine The audacity... Oh, how they shall all get as much red stuff as their hearts desire in due time... _RED_ stuff
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Oct 4th, 2003, 01:37 AM | #2 |
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Very nice sir I like it a lot actually... i think i might share that one w/ a couple of my friends outside of here if that is okay with you... you have a real talent for the poetry! Make sure you keep at it!
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Oct 6th, 2003, 03:05 PM | #3 |
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Have I told you you have an amazing lyrical talent ? You use words that have something like an antique flavor in them.
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Oct 7th, 2003, 12:33 AM | #4 | |
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Oct 7th, 2003, 04:22 AM | #5 |
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I'm sorry. I also didn't comment lately, mainly because after the long period away from the pc, I completely lost contact with anything involving the forums
I agree with both previous comments, I think they said it better than I possibly could now. And I find Rei's "antique flavor" definition very appropriate. Just a question, with no direct reference to this work (it's a general question): do you read Rimbaud or similar French poets? |
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Oct 13th, 2003, 08:21 PM | #7 |
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Aww... I wish I could write something like that! You have great talent man! I envy your ability to write poems!
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Oct 14th, 2003, 09:11 AM | #8 | |
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Nov 19th, 2003, 01:58 AM | #9 | |
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