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[Soul Angel]

Here's part 11


They had all reached back to the shore and were getting off the Air Pod. Eclipse starts to stretch his arms and takes a deep breath.

Eclipse: “Ahhh nothing like seeing the blue sky and smelling the fresh air again.”

Tito and Alex fall to their knees onto the ground.

Tito & Alex: “Ugh....”

Eclipse: “What’s wrong with you two, Not getting land sick are you’re?”

Tito stands back up onto his feet and looks at Eclipse a bit annoyed

Tito: “No..”
Alex: “Speak for yourself! Why is everything so still up here?”
Eclipse: “Don’t think about it to much...... Try looking up into the sky at the clouds, there moving!”

Alex and Tito look up into the sky.
Just then Yasmin and Kilma start running towards them.

Yasmin: “Eclipse, Hope you’re both back!”
Eclipse: “Hi’ya you two, how’s it been, did you miss us?”
Yasmin: “Of course..... Sorry about being to afraid to go into the water.”
Hope: “Don’t worry about it it’s not you’re thought.”

Yasmin looks at Tito and runs straight at him.

Yasmin: “Are you Tito from the Esacswifts?”
Tito: “The one and only!”
Yasmin: “And you must be Alex right!”
Alex: “Nice to meet you.”
Yasmin: “YESS!!”
Kilma: “So what happened to Alan?”
Eclipse: “Well you see...”
Tito: “He wasn’t able to come so he sent his me along and I basically brought a friend along as well.”

Kilma: “Oh! Well nice to meet you I’m Kilma.”
Eclipse: “Well now we’ve introduced one another, shall we head off... I think there’s a place called Bareconda close by, we should be able to get a boat from there to Coewe Island.”

Tito: “Why Coewe Island?”
Eclipse: “Rumour has in that there is an old Temple there with some artifacts about what seems to talk about the Terror.”

Tito: “Really..... But didn’t the Terror only appeared for the very first time only 14 years ago?”
Eclipse: “Yes I know, that’s what makes the whole thing so intriguing, Don’t you think so?”

Tito: “Hmm now you mentioning it, it does sound quite interesting and strange..... Well come on what are we waiting for, Lets go!”

Tito runs off ahead.

Kilma: “Wow he’s definitely got a lot of energy in him.”
Alex: “Believe me Tito has enough energy for everyone.”

They all headed out of Spirit lake and Headed towards Bareconda, when there Tito runs out in front of the group.

Tito: “So this is Bareconda.”
Eclipse: “Yep this is the only port on this continent”
Hope: “Tell me Tito, have you ever been to land before, I mean Alan is an adventurer.”

Tito: “No..... After taking me in, they stopped coming to the land, so I’ve only explored the underwater world, and I haven’t even been everywhere there let!”

Hope: “Why is that then?”
Tito: “I don’t no..... Now you mention it I never really thought about.”
Eclipse: “Well you can talk about this on the way to Coewe Island, first we need to find the boat to get there.”

Kilma: “Um just one last thing.... Yasmin will you be okay going on a boat?”

Yasmin: “Yeah no problem, its just with the air pod it was like we were going to actually go in the water..... Well something like that, besides I don’t want to be afraid of going in water any more........ Tito will you help me get over my fear of water?”

Tito: “Of course........ But first we need to find that boat of ours.”

Alex quickly puts his hand on Tito's shoulder and says at the same time

Alex: “And who better to do it but you Tito.”
Tito: “Huh me! Well okay then, leave it to me!”

Tito went in search for the port. When Tito arrives at the Port.

Tito: “Well here's the port but where’s our boat, perhaps I should try asking someone for there help.”

Tito meets up with a group of sailors at the very end of the line of boats.

Tito: “Er hi’ya there, is this the boat to Coewe Island?”
1st Sailor: “Yeah why do you ask?”
Tito: “Well me and some friends are after to go to Coewe Island you see.”

2nd Sailor: “Ha got 10,000G.”
Tito: “10,000G you’re kidding me, no way can it cost 10,000G!”
3rd Sailor: “No money no boat.”

Kilma then steps forward as well as as the others come and meet up with Tito

Kilma: “Look here mister all six of us are after to go to this island.”

1st Sailor: “Did he say 10,000G sorry he meant 10G.”
Kilma: “Now that’s better..... So when is the boat leaving.”
1st Sailor: “When ever your ready to go mame.”

Tito and the rest of the gang got on to the boat.
In the boat, in the living area.

Eclipse: “Well it’s going to be one long trip.”
Yasmin: “What do you mean long Trip?!”
Eclipse: “Well lets say I think we should get some sleep.”
Yasmin: “Urg I feel sick.”

Tito: “Try and stay near the middle of the room you shouldn’t be able to feel the waves as much........ But perhaps you should go to your cabin and sleep it out.”

Yasmin: “Yeah perhaps your right, see’ya tomorrow.”
Eclipse: “Well I think she’s got the right idea and I think we should all do the same.”

You now find yourself on the deck where you see Tito practising his sword skills with his eyes close.
Just then Eclipse appears and watches him for a while, just then Eclipse decides to speak.

Eclipse: “Sword meditating.”
Tito: “Huh! Oh its you Eclipse, you startled me.”
Eclipse: “Sorry didn’t mean to.”

Tito: “A old friend of mine showed me how to do it........ Your suppose to bring mind, body and soul together so you move and think as one.”

Eclipse: “Yeah, suppose to make you far more accurate when fighting and all.”
Tito: “You Sword meditate too?”
Eclipse: “No I’ve just heard about it.”
Tito: “Oh....... So you can’t sleep.”

Tito continues on sword meditating but keeps his eyes open now.

Eclipse: “Yeah..... I’ve never slept well on boats.”
Tito: “Hmm you want some sleepsway........ That should allow you to sleep for a couple of hours.”

Eclipse: “Errr a underwater plant that can supposedly knock a Moonzeal out cold?”
Tito: “Give it enough it can.”

Eclipse: “Hmm I think I’ll pass this time but thanks for the offer anyway.”
Tito: “You don’t trust me?”
Eclipse: “I rather try not to use such stuff.”

Tito: “............"
Tito: "Yo Eclipse let me ask you something.”
Eclipse: “What is it?”
Tito: “You like Hope?”
Eclipse: “Sure I like her!..... Why trying to see what competition you’ve got.”
Tito: “Huh no just curious that’s all.”

Eclipse: “Yeah well see’ya around I’m going back to try and get some sleep you should too, its going to be a long day tomorrow.”

Tito: “Don’t worry I will.”

The black hair lady in the burning village returns. She then stops smiling and her blue eyes look so sad, she then turns and starts running back into the burning village. While this is happening a voice speaks.

“What the, what are you trying to tell me?"
"Who are you?"
"What do you want with me?"
"Why do you haunt me again, leave me alone I want to sleep.”


To be continued.........

[Pu the Owl]

UGH! Now I'm so curious about what's coming next

Soul, when do you think you'll post part 12?

haha sorry ok, I'll look forward to it and be quiet :p

A random question: is it me or Eclipse and Tito don't feel the greatest sympathy for each other? Oh, well, maybe it's just this last part...let's see what's going to happen

[Soul Angel]

For your question Fortune about if Eclipse and Tito don't feel the greatest sympathy for each other? Well I don't think they really do but you'll just have to wait and see really what will happen between these two

Well here's part 12 of Magikala



[You now see Tito coming out of his cabin and streching his arms up. He then scratches the back of his head again.]

Tito: “Man I just can’t get to sleep.”

[Just then Tito heard some singing coming from the deck of the boat.]

Tito: I wonder who is that singing?”

[Tito heads up on deck and there he sees Hope humming a tune and looking up at the stars while at the side of the boat.]

Tito: “That’s a nice tune.”
Hope: “Tito!”

[Tito walks to Hope's side]

Tito: “Oops did I startle you again.”
Hope: “Well kind of..... Um isn’t the stars so beautiful tonight.”
Tito: “Yeah..... You don’t really see the stars where I come from though.”
Hope: “It must be awlful for you.”

[Tito turns round and leans on the barrier with his back and looks down at the wooden deck.]

Tito: “What you don’t know can’t hurt you..... But maybe now it will.”

[Hope puts a worried face on. Tito looks up and looks at Hope.]

Tito: “Whats wrong? Are you okay?”
Hope: “Yes its just getting a bit cold that’s all.”

Tito: “Well well we better.. I mean you better head back to your cabin!?”
Hope: Hehehe...”
Hope: “Tito can you walk me back to my Cabin, I’ll feel safer that way with you there.”

Tito: “Sure I can! But why do you ask? ”
Hope: “I don’t trust those sailors which we met on this boat.”

[Tito stops leaning on the barrier and turns to face Hope]

Tito: “Arr there harmless! But don’t worry I’ll protect you from them and the Terror!”
Hope: “Thank you.”

[Tito and Hope were just about to head off when three sailors jumped out in front of them.]

Tito: "What the!?"
1st sailor: "Will be taken the young lady with us if you don't mind!"

[Tito quickly stands in front of Hope to help keep her out of reach from the sailor's grasp.]

Tito: "Well I do mind, so you better think twice before trying to lay a finger on her!"
2nd sailor: "You don't know who you are talking too blondie!"

Tito: "Three fish breathed sailors with only fish brains too from the look of things!"
3rd sailor: "Grrr, lets give it to him!"
1st sailor: "I agree lets show him who's boss here!"

2nd sailor: "Just get rid of him! And throw his corpse overboard afterwards!"

[Tito drawed his sword out ready to fight the sailors, he quickly talks to Hope behind him but still facing the sailors at the same time.]

Tito: "Hope go somewhere safe! I'll deal with these three!"
Hope: "Okay, just be careful Tito okay?"

[Tito nods his head and Hope hurries to somewhere safe while Tito and the sailors prepare to fight.]

Tito: "Okay show me what you've got!!"

[The three sailors charge at Tito. Tito jumps into the air above them and turns his body round in mid air. As he lands back down facing behind them he slices his sword into the 3rd sailor's back while landing back onto the ground. Just then the 2nd sailor charges at Tito, but Tito quickly hits the sailor knocking him off overboard into the cold sea waves below.
Now only the 1st sailor is left but isn't anywhere to be seen.
Just then from the corner of Tito's eye he notices something flying towards him. Tito quickly ducks down as the thing flies past him and sticks itself onto a wooden crate behind him. Tito looks and notices it is a knife, Tito then draws his eye's towards where it came from and spots the remaining sailor.]

Tito: "You still want to fight me?!"
Sailor: "Ha I'm not going to lose to some boy like you!"

[The Sailor draws out his sword]

Sailor: "DIE!!"
Tito: "I gave you a chance to live!"

[Tito and the sailor charge at each other as they did Tito's and the Sailor's sword clash together and from the force of it Tito gets knocked to the ground and his sword slides across the deck of the ship as Tito accidently lets go of it.]

Sailor: "Ha you fool! Did you really think you can defeat me!"

[The sailor raises his sword ready to bring it down onto Tito. Just then Tito looks up and notices just a little way back of him was the knife. Just as the sailor was bringing his sword down, Tito does a backwards roll and gets back onto his feet he then grabs the knife from behind him without looking and chucks it at the sailor. The knife flies gracefully towards the sailor and pieces into his heart. The sailor drops his sword and looks at the knife which has pieced into him, he starts to stumble backwards and slowly looks at Tito who is just watching him. The sailor stumbles backwards some more and slowly turns round and falls off the boat to the sea below.

Tito just looks not bothering to move as the cold breeze sea winds play with his hair which slowly slides across his face, he then slowly turns round and brushes his hair back in place, while doing this he walks off in search of Hope and collecting his sword at the same time.]

Tito: "Hope its safe now."

[Hope slowly peers round from behind some crates and looks at Tito with tears in her eyes. She then slowly walks up to him and falls into his arms. Where Tito holds her close to him and tears start to slowly fall from Hope's eyes.]

Hope: "Tito are they..."
Tito: "(in quiet silent almost voice) Yeah.... Yeah they are.."
Hope: "........."
Tito: "Don't worry the water spirit will be kind to them."

[Hope looks up at Tito]

Hope: "There was no other way was there?"

[Tito shakes his head]
Tito: "No....... No there wasn't..... I'm sorry."
Hope: "Don't be."

[Tito once again holds Hope close to him.]

Hope: "We should head back now to the cabins.."
Tito: "Yeah..... Come on I'll take you back to your cabin."

[The both of them started to slowly head back under the deck when just then out of the blue]

Swift: “Take that!”

[Swift hits Tito in the stomach and making Tito fall to the ground clutching his stomach in pain.]

Tito: “Urgg!”
Swift: “I knew I couldn’t trust you!”
Hope: “Swift?”

Tito: “Urg.... Why did you do that for?”
Swift: “You tried to hurt Hope!”
Tito: “What?!....... You Stupid fur ball!!...... I came and checked that she was alright!”
Hope: “Swift he did....... He wasn’t going to hurt me.”

Swift: “What?!.... Why are you sticking up to a pathetic Human!”
Tito: “What!..... Hope’s human as well!! (Tito looks at Hope) Aren’t you’re?”

Hope: “Well yes........ But you see Mons don’t class us Edrens as Humans, but as Edrens, if you get what I mean.”

Tito: “...... Okay?”
Swift: “Well Hope shall we head back to our cabin?”
Tito: “Well actually......”
Hope: “Alright Swift...... Tito thank you for taking me back this far.”
Tito: “Sure...”

[Hope and Swift started to carry on down the hallway.]

Swift: “What was that all about?”
Hope: “Swift you ask too many questions at times.”

[Tito was left dazed and a bit confused from what has happened.
Its the next day and Tito is still sleeping in his cabin. He then wakes up to find Hope there.]

Tito: “Hope!”
Hope: “Hehehe...... You look so cute and peaceful when you are sleeping.”

[Tito sits up and starts to scratch the back of his head.]

Tito: “Aarrg.”
Hope: “Sorry about last night with Swift and that........ She isn’t really that bad when you get to know her.”

Tito: “I’ll take your word for it........ But are you okay?”
Hope: "Yeah I'm fine, but are you?"

Tito: "Yeah the Eoforwine tribe is a fighting tribe, even though it has been peaceful for over 50 years now....... We're still taught to be prepared for the worst, like death and all."

Hope: "Oh..... I feel sorry for you guys then..."
Tito: "Don't be.... I'm not!"

[Hope looks at Tito and smiles]

Hope: “Well come on we’ve reached Coewe island and the rest of the gang are waiting on deck.”

[Tito nod his head. and the both of them go to the deck of the ship and meet up with the rest of the gang.]

Alex: “Well sleeping beauty has finally awaking......... Man I’m starting to believe there’s nowhere where you can’t sleep.”

Tito: “Oh whatever Alex!”
Eclipse: “Come on lets go......... The Temple should be in the middle of the Island.”

[They all got off the boat and started heading to the middle of the island in search of the temple.]


To be continued..........

I hope you liked it

[Carlito]

Good work Soul Angel!
You're very fast! You've written 12 parts of your nice story in little time and they're all good IMO.

You should post other characters' portraits in the gallery as well

[Ruby Moon]

It's nice that you're keeping on writing your Magikala Story
Keep it up!

[Mana]

I hope it's not late to reply!

I like your story Soul Angel, I think it's nice.
I'd just like you to describe also the deepest aspects of your characters' personalities. That would be really involving and your story will be perfect.

A good work

[Soul Angel]

Thanks everyone for your comments
I'll try and post the next chapter asap