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Nov 4th, 2002, 07:34 PM | #1 |
Hero of Darkness
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Location: In between the depths of Time
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Busted Memories...
Busted Memories
Their dancing is a part of history First tender kiss... swept away in the breeze Nights together from sunset to sunrise... gone Two loving souls; nothing more than memories Walking past each other When they used to be together Not a single glance; not another chance For her to talk to him; for him to go to her They used to be inseparable One would kiss the other; the other kiss right back These former times of happiness... finished These opposites never again to attract Teardrops down their tender cheeks Laughter of happiness leaving their mouths To think of what they used to have Now with it gone, I wonder how Their very last night together... Sitting by the Television Definition of time not having been yet invented Neither soul could ever get tired But once the one heart split back to two Once their entangled souls ran from each other Seeing them leave and walk away I think I'm dreaming This just can't be over...
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Nov 4th, 2002, 08:15 PM | #2 |
Retired...
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Swamp hill.
Age: 38
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Wow, very nice man. That had a lot of good imagery and it really gets you thinking. I think we can all relate to this poem in some way. Nice job oddo!
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Nov 5th, 2002, 01:38 AM | #3 | |
just a rolling stone
Joined: Apr 2002
Location: of what?
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This is... a very nice poem. It's so sentimental and touching. It's really very pretty, honest. I'm not much of a "poem person", but this one is really very nice. The way they toughts are portrayed are very simple to understand, yet have a deep meaning. It's, I think, very simple to relate to this poem if you've ever been in a relationship and have had it end. Blah... blah... in short : it's... very nice. |
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Nov 23rd, 2002, 10:20 AM | #4 |
Mighty Captain
Joined: Mar 2002
Location: Nautilus
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Cool poem
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Nov 23rd, 2002, 11:04 AM | #5 |
Now Im Nothing
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Rochester, NY
Age: 40
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Excellent poem man!! I really enjoyed that. i am going through something kinda like that and i can relate. Again great job!
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Nov 26th, 2002, 01:39 AM | #6 | |
pazparacolombia
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Restless dreams...
Age: 43
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This poem moved me, largely because I'm going through the same thing right now and have before, too. When you really are that close to somebody, you do feel like one being, with one beating heart, as you put it (or imply,) and then when it ends...itis like trying to live with half a heart. Great Poem. _RED_ stuff
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