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Oct 4th, 2004, 06:59 PM | #1 |
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Days Gone;
I usually aim to refrain from rhyme of most sorts, but sometimes it's nice to be released to rhyme my heart away. So silly words here.
Days Gone; Now born of hate and joy long gone A secret dawn, the secret songs that everyone still keeps inside Some loves can fade, some hatreds die. We're all still here so melancholy all those tears and fields of poppies that gave their blood so we can live I sold my heart to the abyss. All things will fade to shame, if we could but stay the same but those are days gone by. So raise yourself and don't give in. So raise your game but don't give in please If nothing will now shine for you and age surplants a virtue true; all things will just fade to shame if we could but stay the same. So raise yourself and don't give in. It has a wonderfully silly tune as well. xx Last edited by Faile; Oct 4th, 2004 at 07:03 PM.. |
Oct 27th, 2004, 08:44 AM | #2 |
Now Im Nothing
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thats a good one... i would love to hear the tune too ... I liked how it didnt rhyme too much... but you really got some good points across in it too... very well done. I look forward to reading more soon
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Oct 27th, 2004, 05:34 PM | #3 |
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hey! thanks for commenting. maybe i'll throw a recording online some day. i have about four versions of it kicking around on this pc.
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Oct 28th, 2004, 09:01 AM | #4 | |
Now Im Nothing
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Nov 12th, 2004, 08:56 AM | #5 |
The One & Only
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That's Beautiiful Faile. I love it.
Fave Bit: We're all still here so melancholy all those tears and fields of poppies that gave their blood so we can live I sold my heart to the abyss. I'm really looking forward to you loading up some of your music online! ~ Piggle x x x x
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