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Mar 17th, 2004, 09:51 PM | #1 |
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Make the most.....
Another Rhymer...
Time goes on and moons pass by the sun the stars the endless sky it all adds up, and burries deep the years and months and days and weeks And endless cycle of wake and sleep the people move as heards of sheep so many yet so few that make a difference in this circum shape I leave you with this one ideal shed the fake and hold whats real Time is endless this is true the difference is just what you do MAKE THE MOST OF THE TIME YOUR GIVEN LIVE EVERY DAY LIKE ITS YOUR LAST
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Mar 18th, 2004, 11:34 AM | #2 |
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Vicious man you should look into being one of those R&B artists. You got the rythym and shit down, and some nice lyrics. Go for the music career.
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Mar 18th, 2004, 06:40 PM | #3 |
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Thanks man. I really dig that style of writing. Some people see it as sort of elementary. Im well aware that every line doesent have to rhyme for poetry to be good, thats just sort of how I enjoy it most. Sort of like song lyrics as you said.
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Mar 19th, 2004, 06:12 AM | #4 |
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Really cool Vicious it looks like a description of what happens with people everyday..i think it describes a vicious circle or something...as in people get up ,go thru the day then go back to bed, sometimes without even enjoying life it self..anyway very cool...
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Mar 23rd, 2004, 01:28 AM | #5 |
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Ditto what Eli said!
Your stuffs so good! If you dont want to be in the limelight yourself or you cant for some reason or other then maybe look into writing lyrics for other artists! Rhyming or not ,it doesnt matter as long as its good, its different for each person. Piggle x x x x
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Mar 24th, 2004, 07:25 PM | #6 |
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Thanks for the positive feedback
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