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Nov 5th, 2002, 10:56 PM
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This sucks
It sucks
It sucks when you see it I had it happen to me Some people have Some not It made me and others cry As you can see I am fine now But I still dream I cry nights to nights Not no more But when It happened I felt dead Dead as she did My hands felt numb I could not touch I couldnt feel her hair It was the last time That I would see my mom This really sucks but I did it like in 2 seconds, it is prob one of the worst poems ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
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Nov 12th, 2002, 10:59 PM
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Its your thoughts, your instincts...... Pretty good.
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Nov 16th, 2002, 12:53 PM
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pretty dAMN good
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Nov 16th, 2002, 05:50 PM
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For reals though do you really like it? I just made it up like in 10 seconds!
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Nov 16th, 2002, 06:21 PM
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Nov 16th, 2002, 06:28 PM
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Ight sweet thanx
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Nov 25th, 2002, 06:53 PM
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damn man, same thing happened 2 me, when I was 9 I saw my mom 4 the last time, and never saw her again
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Nov 26th, 2002, 12:53 AM
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I dug this Audio. Often it's hard to get one's self to be able to be happy with a poem that they have themself write about a specific thing like this, especially something that's such a serious issue. I think you took an interesting approach by just saying what came to your head about things at a given moment. I think you inadvertantly found a solution to this problem in poetry writing. Good job
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