I wrote something!

Cannibal Clown · Jul 24th, 2002, 02:04 PM

I stare at myself from a puddle
at the bottom of a hole
seeing what i truely look like
dirty
stained
seeping away
wondering how it got so bad
all this time i got so sad
thinking i could be so glad
if i got back all i had
the friends who thought i was worth something
the people who once knew my name
before i earned all of this shame
because i was the one to blame
so now i see
what all they see
lonely standing over there
does anybody really care
of coarse they don't
not for me
they don't give a damn
sincelely
so again i see
that image of me
reflected in mud
in captivity

I know that i never write anything and actually post it here. But i conjured this up during a bit of idle time while talking to a friend. It seemed kinda good, so i copied and pasted it here, and wondering if you guys think it's worth the thread space.

Uchiha Sasuke · Jul 24th, 2002, 02:49 PM

Hey thats good CC but when are you put up those songs we made up at my house .

Hylas · Jul 24th, 2002, 02:57 PM

Hey! That's a quite good work, I think! I liked it!

Soul Angel · Jul 24th, 2002, 05:34 PM

That's really good Cannibal, I like it!

Keep it up!

Cannibal Clown · Jul 25th, 2002, 11:08 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by SSSnake
Hey thats good CC but when are you put up those songs we made up at my house .

When i write em down.

I still have to figure out how all of the lyrics are going to fit together. All i have are the ideas i came up with while winging it while in your garage. Nothing on paper yet.

007_JamesBond · Jul 25th, 2002, 06:52 PM

Do you think that you remember all the words to GUTTER BALL, that song will be a classic, lol and nice words CC I tip my hat to you

IcyMourdor · Jul 26th, 2002, 10:05 AM

Nice one Steve. You should keep on writing. I haven't wrote anything in a long time, oh well.

Gutter Ball, good times. SSSnake on guitar, 007 on drums, CC on vocals. One of the best times I've had with you guys. I think SSSnake has the words on some paper at his house.

Jul 24th, 2002, 02:04 PM	#1
Cannibal Clown Taijutsu Master Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Konoha Village Age: 40 Posts: 2,129	I wrote something! I stare at myself from a puddle at the bottom of a hole seeing what i truely look like dirty stained seeping away wondering how it got so bad all this time i got so sad thinking i could be so glad if i got back all i had the friends who thought i was worth something the people who once knew my name before i earned all of this shame because i was the one to blame so now i see what all they see lonely standing over there does anybody really care of coarse they don't not for me they don't give a damn sincelely so again i see that image of me reflected in mud in captivity I know that i never write anything and actually post it here. But i conjured this up during a bit of idle time while talking to a friend. It seemed kinda good, so i copied and pasted it here, and wondering if you guys think it's worth the thread space. __________________ If you could see the future, would you try to change it? Would you keep trying... even if you knew you would always fail?

Jul 24th, 2002, 02:49 PM	#2
Uchiha Sasuke Cursed Joined: Jan 2002 Location: AWOL! Age: 42 Posts: 3,841	Hey thats good CC but when are you put up those songs we made up at my house . __________________ *~I've Lost Myself, Life no longer matters~* *~The Official Ps2Fantasy Ninja~* *~A Life Without Love, Is No Life At All~* Social Networks

Jul 24th, 2002, 05:34 PM	#4
Soul Angel Senior Member Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Um...? Pulls out map Age: 42 Posts: 1,887	That's really good Cannibal, I like it! Keep it up! __________________ "I'm back! But for how long who knows? But PS2Fantasy will always be on my mind!"

Jul 25th, 2002, 06:52 PM	#6
007_JamesBond Angel of Darkness Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere, but then again nowhere Age: 40 Posts: 1,692	Do you think that you remember all the words to GUTTER BALL, that song will be a classic, lol and nice words CC I tip my hat to you __________________ Vini Vidi Vici victory comes to those who want it the most i am only mearly surviving

Jul 26th, 2002, 10:05 AM	#7
IcyMourdor Cream Puff Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Stevens Point, Wisconsin Age: 40 Posts: 2,713	Nice one Steve. You should keep on writing. I haven't wrote anything in a long time, oh well. Gutter Ball, good times. SSSnake on guitar, 007 on drums, CC on vocals. One of the best times I've had with you guys. I think SSSnake has the words on some paper at his house. __________________ You will walk in fire, earth, water, and air, through temptation, and at last into despair and desolation.

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Jul 24th, 2002, 02:57 PM	#3
Hylas Now or Never Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Zürich Age: 44 Posts: 2,456	Hey! That's a quite good work, I think! I liked it!

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