Spit sample 1

Redpyramidhead · May 13th, 2005, 12:56 PM

Here is a sample of some of my latest rap lyrics. I thought it about time to share some:

a vortex in vertices
mathematical equations now enforce a disease/
to weaken all wak emcees
tha detrimental to tha masses mental abilities/
to kill wit these emotions
sanities unfulfilled fantasies is what keeps me goin/
so capture these here moments
enraptured omens now enraged against skilled opponents/

Thank You ahead for any comments. PEACE

_RED_ stuff

Piggle_humsy · May 18th, 2005, 08:52 AM

So I came and checked it out.. but I dunno.. it's hard to kinda feel it from just reading it.. I think I need to hear it..
I mean I can appreciate the lyrics but reading them doesn't give them full credit...
if you know what I mean...

Redpyramidhead · Feb 12th, 2007, 04:14 PM

Wow... I mean look at this I forgot that I wrote it and its not half bad I could totally rework the rhythm structure a little bit and use it.

Hmmmm..............

RED

May 13th, 2005, 12:56 PM	#1
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 45 Posts: 2,002	Spit sample 1 Here is a sample of some of my latest rap lyrics. I thought it about time to share some: a vortex in vertices mathematical equations now enforce a disease/ to weaken all wak emcees tha detrimental to tha masses mental abilities/ to kill wit these emotions sanities unfulfilled fantasies is what keeps me goin/ so capture these here moments enraptured omens now enraged against skilled opponents/ Thank You ahead for any comments. PEACE _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

May 18th, 2005, 08:52 AM	#2
Piggle_humsy The One & Only Joined: Dec 2002 Location: Being Reborn Age: 43 Posts: 2,132	So I came and checked it out.. but I dunno.. it's hard to kinda feel it from just reading it.. I think I need to hear it.. I mean I can appreciate the lyrics but reading them doesn't give them full credit... if you know what I mean... __________________

Feb 12th, 2007, 04:14 PM	#3
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 45 Posts: 2,002	Wow... I mean look at this I forgot that I wrote it and its not half bad I could totally rework the rhythm structure a little bit and use it. Hmmmm.............. RED __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

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