We 9-11

AudioBoxer · Sep 8th, 2002, 12:31 PM

We take 2 steps back
We slip
We fall into my steep
We die
We think
We wish
We pray
We hope
We know it wont happen
We dont pay attention
We get hurt
We get hurt more than ever
We Fight back
We win
We celebrate
We forget
About the lives we lost!

do you like it?

Black Heart · Sep 8th, 2002, 10:00 PM

Very simple poem, but sincere.
Nice one

Beretta55 · Sep 8th, 2002, 11:53 PM

pretty good poem i like it good job.

Lost_myth · Sep 14th, 2002, 06:47 PM

I think that it actually sounds pretty good. I was confused at first, but then I read it out loud.

What was the message or the main thought of the poem?

I know you are thinking dumbass, it's about september 11. Would you care to explain it more?

AudioBoxer · Sep 21st, 2002, 05:35 PM

Its more about, reg people that dont pay attention to what is happening in the world, Some people dont give a flying f*ck what happend! I do and most of us do. All it is saying nobody realizes how much of a flaw it is to loose a human being!

Sword 4 Hire · Sep 22nd, 2002, 04:13 PM

Very Nice

Sep 8th, 2002, 12:31 PM	#1
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	We 9-11 We take 2 steps back We slip We fall into my steep We die We think We wish We pray We hope We know it wont happen We dont pay attention We get hurt We get hurt more than ever We Fight back We win We celebrate We forget About the lives we lost! do you like it?

Sep 8th, 2002, 11:53 PM	#3
Beretta55 Reached for the sky Joined: May 2002 Location: The road less traveled Age: 36 Posts: 2,465	pretty good poem i like it good job. __________________

Sep 14th, 2002, 06:47 PM	#4
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 39 Posts: 1,057	I think that it actually sounds pretty good. I was confused at first, but then I read it out loud. What was the message or the main thought of the poem? I know you are thinking dumbass, it's about september 11. Would you care to explain it more? __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

Sep 22nd, 2002, 04:13 PM	#6
Sword 4 Hire Retired... Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Swamp hill. Age: 40 Posts: 1,632	Very Nice __________________ and for now the tired soldier sheathes his sword...

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We 9-11

Sep 8th, 2002, 10:00 PM	#2
Black Heart Mighty Captain Joined: Mar 2002 Location: Nautilus Posts: 273	Very simple poem, but sincere. Nice one

Sep 21st, 2002, 05:35 PM	#5
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	Its more about, reg people that dont pay attention to what is happening in the world, Some people dont give a flying f*ck what happend! I do and most of us do. All it is saying nobody realizes how much of a flaw it is to loose a human being!


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