Ennui of a Beast

Redpyramidhead · Oct 17th, 2002, 01:15 AM

Well this is my first time sharing something in this forum so I hope it is well received. I guess I'll start things off with a poem:

Ennui of a Beast

to come upon a somber horse
in a field of its own solitude
by its own making
a spectre by design and in its own forsaking
ennui, ennui, you say it hath too long bathed in
but do you not see the sepulchral storm beneath and within
not on the horizon but in the horizon the hordes have amassed
samael, I heed not your warning for I have eaten their bitter melon
sin against sin surpassed

to come upon a somber horse
in a field of its own solitude
and to learn to leave it be
leave the useless thing be
just be

_RED_ stuff

Sword 4 Hire · Oct 17th, 2002, 09:43 AM

Holy crap, that poem was awesome. I'm very interested in your works now

Good job!

Darkness 4 Hire · Oct 17th, 2002, 10:33 AM

Very awesome my friend, keep up the writing. Your gonna be great!

Ruby Moon · Oct 17th, 2002, 10:39 AM

That poem is really good! I hope you to post more of them!
I think I liked especially division in those two parts, and the fact the first one is more explicit, while the second one, though it's not clear without reading the first verses, it's really the one that gave me the idea of the "ennui" ( I won't ruin everything translating in english the french term

). BTW, the language is really suitable and ok, I liked it!

Hylas · Oct 18th, 2002, 10:50 AM

Sorry if I ask, but ennui means boredom something like the latin "taedium", right?

Don't know why, but this poem, despite its beauty, gave me a sense of anxiety

Lost_myth · Oct 18th, 2002, 01:59 PM

It was a good poem. I really liked the language you used. It made it enjoyable to read. I think the deeper meaning takes me a while to really open it up.

Redpyramidhead · Oct 21st, 2002, 12:28 AM

Thanks guys.

I am inspired to post more lyrics and poetry in the future due to the feedback you have given me! I'll be trying to pay xtra attention to the writings of those who took the time to post here, btw. Seeya with something new soon

_RED_ stuff

Oct 17th, 2002, 01:15 AM	#1
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	Ennui of a Beast Well this is my first time sharing something in this forum so I hope it is well received. I guess I'll start things off with a poem: Ennui of a Beast to come upon a somber horse in a field of its own solitude by its own making a spectre by design and in its own forsaking ennui, ennui, you say it hath too long bathed in but do you not see the sepulchral storm beneath and within not on the horizon but in the horizon the hordes have amassed samael, I heed not your warning for I have eaten their bitter melon sin against sin surpassed to come upon a somber horse in a field of its own solitude and to learn to leave it be leave the useless thing be just be _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

Oct 17th, 2002, 09:43 AM	#2
Sword 4 Hire Retired... Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Swamp hill. Age: 37 Posts: 1,632	Holy crap, that poem was awesome. I'm very interested in your works now Good job! __________________ and for now the tired soldier sheathes his sword...

Oct 17th, 2002, 10:33 AM	#3
Darkness 4 Hire Hero of Darkness Joined: Sep 2002 Location: In between the depths of Time Age: 40 Posts: 122	Very awesome my friend, keep up the writing. Your gonna be great! __________________

Oct 17th, 2002, 10:39 AM	#4
Ruby Moon The Cynical Clone Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Lakeview Hotel Posts: 496	That poem is really good! I hope you to post more of them! I think I liked especially division in those two parts, and the fact the first one is more explicit, while the second one, though it's not clear without reading the first verses, it's really the one that gave me the idea of the "ennui" ( I won't ruin everything translating in english the french term ). BTW, the language is really suitable and ok, I liked it! __________________

Oct 18th, 2002, 01:59 PM	#6
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	It was a good poem. I really liked the language you used. It made it enjoyable to read. I think the deeper meaning takes me a while to really open it up. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

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Oct 18th, 2002, 10:50 AM	#5
Hylas Now or Never Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Zürich Age: 42 Posts: 2,456	Sorry if I ask, but ennui means boredom something like the latin "taedium", right? Don't know why, but this poem, despite its beauty, gave me a sense of anxiety

Oct 21st, 2002, 12:28 AM	#7
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	Thanks guys. I am inspired to post more lyrics and poetry in the future due to the feedback you have given me! I'll be trying to pay xtra attention to the writings of those who took the time to post here, btw. Seeya with something new soon _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

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