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May 5th, 2002, 03:36 PM | #1 |
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Ps2Fantasy Under Attack! ~part 2~
Okay, here it is...there have been some changes, again, but I'm sure that if you've read part 1 you know what I'm talking about. If not, too bad!
************************************************** * The team ESS has now been chosen and now their duties will be assinged to them... ************************************************** * ¤Back in MR¤ Meryl: It's done Harry. Harry: Excellent. Who'd you choose? Mourdor: You'll see, they're coming. Fortune: I hope out Elite STUPID squad last more than 5 minutes... .................................................. .................................................. .. ¤After what seems to be an eternity, the door at MR is knocked¤ Mourdor: It's them! Meryl: At least they found the way... CC: What way? Harry: Oh brother... Fortune (in a loud voice) : Come in! ¤All 3 of the cadets try and walk in through the door at the same time and get stuck¤ Hadoken: Ow Mena! Go back!! Mena: Me?!? You're the one in the way! JB: Both of you move! Mourdor: How sad... ¤Fortune stands up and goes back to her shrine¤ Fortune: Oh holy jeebus of st. peppermint... Harry: Not again.. Meryl: Stop it! Will you 3 get in here!! ¤In a attempt to get in, they all fall to the ground¤ Meryl (covering her face with her hands): Oh no... CC: HAHA! You guys are funny! ¤Meryl hits CC with the head of Elvis Presley¤ Meryl: Shut up! CC: Ow! What!! Mourdor: Enough! Onto the task. *ahem* Hadoken, JB and...Mena (Mourdor whispers to Meryl) Ah Meryl, why mena? Meryl: Fine. It's either her or Soul. Pick. Mourdor (after .00000000000000001 nano-seconds): Well, when you put it THAT way...later Mena. Mena (cluelessly) : Huh? What? Hadoken: Hey, where's you guys' restroom? Harry (eyebrow raised up high) : Stop! We have called you 3 here today for a very important reason... JB: MOON! Harry: Excuse me?? JB: I think the answer to Qjij's riddle is the Moon! Harry: Err... Mena (covering mouth) : Tee hee! Mourdor: Listen up! Our home is being attacked by a force known as MCBS and you 3 have been branded the best of the best and are to fight them in 2 days. Our lives depend on you. Do you best! Harry(astonished): Very well said Mourdor. Mourdor: Thanks! Do I get a promotion now? Harry( looks over at Fortune who is still praying to the Chihuahua): We'll talk. Mourdor(grinning): Do you read me soldiers! JB (thinking): Or could it be a moonson..."taller than trees"... hmm Hadoken( thinking) : I wonder if they have any Pepto-Bismol. Mena (thinking): I wonder why the cookie went to the doctor. MOurdor: I repeat, do you read me! CC: Whose reading? Meryl: Arg! *takes out a giant AK-47 out of her back pants pocket* I'm going to kill him! CC: Whaaat! Mourdor (irritated) I SAID : DO YOU READ ME!!! JB: Huh? Oh yeah... Hadoken: Sure... Mena: Why not. Harry: So it's done. You will leave at 18:00 hours. ¤All 3 of them begin to count with their fingers¤ Meryl:....At 6 pm.... Harry:Yes, you 3 are the best. We're counting on you. Make us proud Elite Stupid Squa- Hadoken: WHO? Harry: Er, I mean um, Elite SPECIAL Squad... Mena: Cool! JB: Then again...a waterfall is taller than trees.. Mourdor(opening a safety box) : You each get one weapon. Choose wisely. *In the box are: A shotgun, laser gun, bazooka, a sniper riffle, an AK-47, gas bombs, landmines, an M16, a camper, a katana, smoke bombs, poison grenades, a handgun, 3 water ballons, a net with a handle and a giant banana peal.* Hadoken: Ah, the best goes first! Mena: Oh yeah? Ok then. JB you're first! Hadoken: *JB walks up to the vault and looks at the big arsenal* JB: Woah! Hmm...okay, I'll take the giant banana peal!! Mena: Oh oh! I got the net! Hadoken: Leave me the water ballons!! *everyone else's jaw drops down to the ground* Meryl: Uh, you sure? Mena: Yeah, this net is purtyful! Mourdor: 0.o....o-kay... Harry: *ahem* Um, Very well then. You kiddos go and eat. Make sure you get plenty of rest too. ESS: Yes sir! CC: Hey JB, think you could make some more cookies before you go? JB: Sure thing! Hadoken: Ugh...cookies...where's the bathroom!! *Meryl and Mourdor look at each other with pity* -In the background- Fortune: Oh dear master of macaroni...spare my chibi-Azuka drawing...oh holy sister of st. Panasonic... Harry: Oh man...Okay, you are now armed. Your duties have been stated. Return tomorrow for your departure! ESS: K Harry: Very well. DISMISSED!! ************************************************** * That's all for now! ************************************************** * PS: Mena: *whistles* Hadoken: lol...hmm Hadoken: *tumbleweed goes by* Mena: -dies laughing- Yep, that's a lil bit of the convos. me and Had have. I thought that was SOOO funny Had! LOL BTW, yes I live in a tepee! |
May 5th, 2002, 03:50 PM | #2 |
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Nice one Mena. You did pretty good. Couldn't help but notice a Soul Angel and Mourdor reference in there.
Once again, nice job. Can't wait til the next part. One more thing: Harry, when do I get the promotion?
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May 5th, 2002, 03:56 PM | #3 |
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lol, more! i want more!!
not cookies though... the story. =D btw, isnt it spelt tipee? or err, teepee? no wait. that has the word pee in it... |
May 5th, 2002, 04:56 PM | #4 |
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That's not half bad Mena !
It would be cool if you added some cameo(s) that would have a tiny part in your story ( i.e.: Qjij_jijQ ) Keep up the good work ! |
May 6th, 2002, 11:52 AM | #5 |
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hehehe It's always nice to read a new part of your story !
I must pick one line or two and put them in my signature |
May 6th, 2002, 09:11 PM | #6 |
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I like my character too much!
I must adopt Mena and make her write some screenplays in case I become an actress! |
May 7th, 2002, 04:28 PM | #7 | |
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Quote:
i dont mind what,
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May 7th, 2002, 09:55 PM | #8 |
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I don't mind being in the story or not, because it's funny as it is
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May 10th, 2002, 11:53 AM | #9 |
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that was awsome, I like cookies
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