I guess I'm a little late for this but oh well
It was well documented and the redaction and all were good. And I like the fact that both of "his sides" were shown. Not only that of an extremely intelligent and dedicated man who did something outstanding, but then is shown as well how he becomes greedy (just as anyone who holds big amounst of money or power, or both)
But, didn't you need some sort of concluding paragraph?