It's too happy. Make her depressed or something. Or in the midst of battle. j/k with ya. It's drawn very well and you capture the character well. SHow us more!
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."
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