Let's get something straight here. I have been very grateful for the comments i recieved on this poem up until black heart's comment. I have answered questions regarding what the book was about and went beyond that even to describe how it related to my feelings about writing this poem. I was happy to do that because I like you guys a lot. PS2Fantasy is my home away from hom eon the internet.
Then black heart comes along and atleast to me seems to make comments that suggested that he didn't really pay much attention to the poem which is really what posting in this forum is about, but instead spent more time searching for fault in my interpretation of a book he has never read. I could have been wrong about that and overreacted in hindsight, I don't know, but what he says here:
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Let me post for the last time another pearl of my anti-constructive criticism: I didn't like this poem very much, it's completely true, I prefer some of the other things you have posted in the past. They sound more convincing and genuine, while this one doesn't communicate great spiritualism to the reader (me). It seems more like a notion of spiritualism, an attitude of fascination towards stereotyped spiritual atmospheres, and for this reason I find it quite impersonal and cold, also with all the sensually redundant imagery. Take it as new evidence of my ignorance if you like.
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is such an obviously out right attempt to anger and insult my creative process, possibly even to undermine it, it is totally uncalled for. I don't think what I said warrents any of that. Alas, maybe what he says is true, though. I hope he feels better now. I really do.
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