Wow, man! I wasn't guessing my comment sounded so absoutely dumb! Be sure I won't comment anymore in the future, so that I won't ruin your artistic consciousness
BTW, you call yourself an artist and say people are not open minded enough for your works, but doing so you're not demonstrating much open mindness either.
Let me post for the last time another pearl of my anti-constructive criticism: I didn't like this poem very much, it's completely true, I prefer some of the other things you have posted in the past. They sound more convincing and
genuine, while this one doesn't communicate great spiritualism to the reader (me). It seems more like a notion of spiritualism, an attitude of fascination towards stereotyped spiritual atmospheres, and for this reason I find it quite impersonal and cold, also with all the sensually redundant imagery. Take it as new evidence of my ignorance if you like.