Aint nothin' wrong with bein in touch with your emotions man! I'm happy for you, finding a girl you care so much about... I have been, and am in, your place right now. I write my girl poetry all the time... what I saw with these, maybe you're a new poet, but it's kinda cliché. Of course love is hard to put into words, but try to give her something she's never heard before. As far as that goes, however, these are very stirring and heartfelt little writes here. Thank you for sharing
She's lucky!