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Old Jun 10th, 2003, 06:34 PM   #9
blindman
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Ummm....for those who liked the story so far, i got to say one thing.

Theres a big, big chance im not continuing the story.

1) I kinda lost my interest on it.
2) I dont write much, meaning i take whatever idea and develope it A LOT before i give it a shot at writing it. This story...i just took whatever idea and wrote it.

I dont know though...i think not everyone cares anyway

Well, maybe these announcements are not too exiting:

I may be writing a new type of story that is more about humour.
I may be taking sometime to write a story so please send ideas.

Spoiler: show
Well...want to know what happens to Dario?


OK...EP3: Dario and Ken go to the shop to buy Dario a new Jacket. Ken goes to the bathroom in the mall as Dario waits for his return. A man with a bike hat disturbs the mall, the man had a faint appearance like Kens, and this scares Dario.
Dario and the man cause mayhem in the Mall, but the man gets away.

EP4: Sheryl had just been around Kens house...an extremely horrible accident (she gets hit by a car) strikes Darios memories. She is in the hospital, probably alive.
Thing is, they got some evidence on who it could had been. There was a bikerhat and a licence plate. The bikerhat was like the man he confronted in the mall, and the licence plate told him, could this had been the same man that took his wifes life away? and why was he wearing a bikerhelmet?

EP5: Dario finds that Kennedies property is "assaulted" with references of how Ken could still be a suspect. Dario unotices, he leaves Ken to his own will. Ken and Darios relationship comes to an end.

EP6: It was a dark rainy night. Dario was in the street. He sees a man run into the alley. Dario chases.
After some chasing, Dario meets the man who was desperately running from him, it was the same biker man! they fought on the roof, on the allesy, the rain.
Kennedy appears suddenly, and Dario finds out it is not Ken.
After Dario outskilles the man these are his words. "I wante this day to happen" as dario asked why did he do that. Dario finds out it was the same man, Billy who had been a bully to Dario so long ago. But why? that question is unnanswered, and the man Dies under the rain with the answer. Ken suffers major cuts from broken glass.
12 o'clock at night. In Darios watch, it was five minutes ahead.
The street lights shined on the paved ground while the rain poured down on the street. The phone booth was already occupied, Dario was having trouble with the hard rain on his hair. I should had died with the night he says to himself.
At his house, he falls asleep. He hears the first time in so long, it was his wife.
Dario, dont worry, your search was not in vain. You found out who the man was, and thats what kept me from finally dying. I can finally die, thank you sweetheart, i miss you, i will always, but we will not talk no longer, for now i will fall to my final judgement. I will become a mere spirit, but i will die free, live your life Dario, Live your life for me.
He hears no more...and falls asleep.

So there...thats how it ends, a brief paragraph summary of what happens to Darios life.
Maybe you liked me to actually write it down, but...reasons above.
If i dissapointed you that much...no offense, then you can probably ask me to take the time i wasnt going to take, to write these stories, but i dont think that sounds right.
Sorry for everything, PM me if anything.
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