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Old Jun 7th, 2003, 01:38 AM   #6
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You should write something else maybe, because the prologue is really generic. It's like if you want to sum your story up in few lines, which is good to have a general idea, but it is not enough maybe for people to give suggestions or tell you if they like it or not!
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