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Originally posted by Blindman

Yeah, as i wrote it i though "ok, people would think that this story is about ONE guy and all this happens and then he ends up happy bluh bluh bluh" i didnt want to write it like that, my stories have lots of twists, thats why they are long.

Each story has a lenght depending on the things you want to say, so don't worry if people think your stories are long. It's true that nobody writes only for himself, but also writing just to please others is wrong. The story seems good so far, so don't worry about it and put in it all your ideas