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DragonSphere · Feb 18th, 2002, 09:46 PM

I guess I had to start my fic over afterall, like everyone else has been doing. As compensation for not introducing my earlier chapters before posting Chapter 8, chapters 1-6 will be almost completely redone; with never-before-released information that will hopefully make the storyline flow more smoothly, not make it really complicated, and more entertaining. And of course, correcting as much grammar errors as possible, as seen with my earliest chapters. Well here is a new prologue that I have written with FF:CW that I hope all will enjoy.

Ura, a world plagued with many wars and violence. Throughout its life of over 20 million years, the planet has been disrespected and ignored by its life forms, the Humans and the Mages. All the humans ever cared for were destruction, gluttony, power, and their own selfish pride. Meanwhile, the Mages were at peace, satisfied with what little they have due to power-hungry humans. But one day, a ruthless and foul dictator of the human species rised to great power and created a deadly faction to overcome the rest of the Mages. Soon a Great War erupted, dubbed "Clash of the Species", lasting for about 7 gruesome years. For the aftermath Ura was filled with barren lands, city ruins, and innumerable corpses of fallen warriors. Many now regretted the cause of war and vowed to not repeat it.

As a sign of true peace, the two species sent representatives to sign a pact that will forbid both military and personal relations with each other. This resulted in both good news and bad, but the majority felt it was for the best. So to make this agreement into action, hundreds of workers were sent to build a great structure called the "Gauntlet" that would forever separate the two regions of Humans and Mages. Once completed, all contact between the species stopped. For the next 12,000 years, Ura ceased to experience wars and violence. While the human region grew with technology, the Mages decided to stick to their simple lives of medieval times. It became a period of eternal peace.

But now that peace bond has broken. A new leader of the humans revived age-old grudges against Mages, causing an unbalance in the world. He is the very essence of evil. He wishes to conquer the Mages once more and condemn them to eternal punishment. His catastrophic supremacy will live on if he is not stopped. In response, Ura has chosen a select few that have that ability, along with the "key" to banish this evil from the planet forever. Here then is a story of legend and prophecy. A story of love, friendship, dreams, adventure, life and death. The story of Final Fantasy: Cross World….

Hopefully, this will attract new readers as well.

Feb 18th, 2002, 09:46 PM	#1
DragonSphere Beneath the Shadow Joined: Jan 2002 Age: 38 Posts: 818	Rebirth I guess I had to start my fic over afterall, like everyone else has been doing. As compensation for not introducing my earlier chapters before posting Chapter 8, chapters 1-6 will be almost completely redone; with never-before-released information that will hopefully make the storyline flow more smoothly, not make it really complicated, and more entertaining. And of course, correcting as much grammar errors as possible, as seen with my earliest chapters. Well here is a new prologue that I have written with FF:CW that I hope all will enjoy. Ura, a world plagued with many wars and violence. Throughout its life of over 20 million years, the planet has been disrespected and ignored by its life forms, the Humans and the Mages. All the humans ever cared for were destruction, gluttony, power, and their own selfish pride. Meanwhile, the Mages were at peace, satisfied with what little they have due to power-hungry humans. But one day, a ruthless and foul dictator of the human species rised to great power and created a deadly faction to overcome the rest of the Mages. Soon a Great War erupted, dubbed "Clash of the Species", lasting for about 7 gruesome years. For the aftermath Ura was filled with barren lands, city ruins, and innumerable corpses of fallen warriors. Many now regretted the cause of war and vowed to not repeat it. As a sign of true peace, the two species sent representatives to sign a pact that will forbid both military and personal relations with each other. This resulted in both good news and bad, but the majority felt it was for the best. So to make this agreement into action, hundreds of workers were sent to build a great structure called the "Gauntlet" that would forever separate the two regions of Humans and Mages. Once completed, all contact between the species stopped. For the next 12,000 years, Ura ceased to experience wars and violence. While the human region grew with technology, the Mages decided to stick to their simple lives of medieval times. It became a period of eternal peace. But now that peace bond has broken. A new leader of the humans revived age-old grudges against Mages, causing an unbalance in the world. He is the very essence of evil. He wishes to conquer the Mages once more and condemn them to eternal punishment. His catastrophic supremacy will live on if he is not stopped. In response, Ura has chosen a select few that have that ability, along with the "key" to banish this evil from the planet forever. Here then is a story of legend and prophecy. A story of love, friendship, dreams, adventure, life and death. The story of Final Fantasy: Cross World…. Hopefully, this will attract new readers as well.