wow really!!!!!!
i am so glad to here that)
BACK TO THE STORY
(Measue bites her lip as she waits for sacthers reply the thoughts of what naruto said burning in her mind)
Sacther: alright i trust you and if what you are saying is true then I shall save the village. But you must help me unleash this shorta i place my life in your hands
(measue bow down while Naruto watches waiting by the cave entrance as the sun rises higher)
(satcher and elaine pack up their stuff )
(measue aproaches Naruto still keeping that same serious look her heart hurts for what she is about to do but she knows for his own safety she must)
Measue: ..........Naruto!!!
(Naruto looks at measue measue takes a deep breath)
Measue: NARUTO YOU ARE TOO WEAK RETURN TO THE CLAN YOU ARE JUST ANOTHER NINJA TO ME I DO NOT REQUIRE YOUR ASISTANCE THIS IS MY JOURNEY
(measue picks up her sword her bottom lip quivers as she raises it to naruto's neck )
Measue: go or I will kill you myself
(naruto stern expression remains the same his body remains stiff as measue's hand shakes slightly)
Naruto: then kill me .......
Measue:........
(she whips the sword away as quickly as she pulled it out )
Measue: dam you Naruto you do not understand the powers that be or what the future holds !!!!
Naruto: but i do know that I whatever happens I will face it with you
Measue: take sacther and elaine to minar town its a few miles from here do you understand Naruto
Naruto; what about you????
Measue: i need to find out something do not fallow me naruto protect them!!!
(and with that Measue dissapears through the cave and into the forest a lost Naruto looks on)
Naruto:......~good luck Measue safe return~
(naruto begins to lead sacther amd elaine back to the road and down it tord the town of MINAR)
***quick sujestion trunks since your a ninja try to keep your character mysterious and serious seeing how ninja's keep there feeling to themselfs measue is a lone shark she is always serious keep that in mind because soon the reason for her unwillingness to show any emotion tord anyone will be reveailed keep up the good writing
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