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Hylas · Feb 11th, 2002, 05:18 PM

The story seems good, but there are too many dialogues IMO.
I mean, maybe adding some more action or descriptions would be nice! So you can add lots of details and stuff!

Keep up the good work, your story seems cool!

Feb 11th, 2002, 05:18 PM	#5
Hylas Now or Never Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Zürich Age: 44 Posts: 2,456	The story seems good, but there are too many dialogues IMO. I mean, maybe adding some more action or descriptions would be nice! So you can add lots of details and stuff! Keep up the good work, your story seems cool!