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Your rhyme scemes are complicated and creative. I was trying to rap along to it out loud breaking it up into the different rhymes (which were made nice and clear with the slashes between them) and taking a crack at the rythmn and I'd have to say it works out pretty nicely in its own unique style. Makg tha emcee!
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."
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