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Old Nov 27th, 2002, 04:55 PM   #2
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I liked some rhymes you put here and there, they give a sort of rhythm and and a "beat" to this poem. It's interesting to know that you have wrote in while in Algebra class ahaha it's entertaining for the reader too
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