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I would have to say I was quite drawn into this poem and hung on to every single word. I think your English flows beautifully from word to word and speaks the story you tell in this poem masterfully. This character's story is already pulling on my heart strings! I'm very inspired to buy FF9 now. It's quite evident from your writing what an experience the storyline must be. I think this song should be in the game!
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."
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