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I am impressed with the way you convey your anger in a poem. It's hard to keep it straight especially in a poem about a failed relationship. You did a good job with that. Keep up the good work. Hope it was therapeutic for you.
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."
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