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Awesome addition 007. I think that perhaps you should get rid of the title "Father" it kinda ruins the suprise. And I like the end. It reminds me of resident evil or something with all the old people at the hospital trying to kill you.
Keep it up. I want to know what happens when he reaches the entity.
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