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Rei · Apr 27th, 2002, 07:06 PM

This part ended too early! You can't do this to poor readers

Now I'm terribly curious!
I like the fact you decided to write this story in first person. I forgot telling you this aspect when reading other parts, but I really like the idea. It gives you the impression you're really involved in the story!

Apr 27th, 2002, 07:06 PM	#2
Rei EVA 00 Pilot Joined: Jan 2002 Location: NERV Age: 43 Posts: 2,239	This part ended too early! You can't do this to poor readers Now I'm terribly curious! I like the fact you decided to write this story in first person. I forgot telling you this aspect when reading other parts, but I really like the idea. It gives you the impression you're really involved in the story!