Apr 4th, 2002, 05:45 PM
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Useless Oracle™
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Everywhere
Posts: 5,136
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Glad to see you posted the next part of your story 
This one was very good regarding the feelings of the character.
Even if they're not described directly, you can understand everything very well.
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