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Mana · Mar 22nd, 2002, 03:30 PM

I hope it's not late to reply!

I like your story Soul Angel, I think it's nice.
I'd just like you to describe also the deepest aspects of your characters' personalities. That would be really involving and your story will be perfect.

A good work

Mar 22nd, 2002, 03:30 PM	#6
Mana Girlfriend of Steel Joined: Feb 2002 Location: Secret! Posts: 195	I hope it's not late to reply! I like your story Soul Angel, I think it's nice. I'd just like you to describe also the deepest aspects of your characters' personalities. That would be really involving and your story will be perfect. A good work __________________ Thanks Fortune for the banner ^__^