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And here's part 2 to
Chapter I:
Meanwhile, back at the control room, General Kajisho walks in. "How's the ship..." he pauses, "what the h*ll has happened here!" He wipes his hands over his face and kicks the broken terminal. "Arghh…How am I going to tell this to the press?" The general quickly heads back to the awaiting crowd and tells them of the current situation. "My fellow people of Chryo, it seems a disaster is at hand." Everyone gasped. "We have lost all contact with the HORIS. The control room has been completely torn inside out, to the point where the computer systems cannot be repaired. I assure you that my team of analysts is now looking into the case, with aid from the military as well. We will try, no, do our best to ensure the life of Drake Jishad on board the spacecraft. That is all." And he left them. The large crowd was shocked, especially Jane, "Brother I hope you are all right." she whispered to herself.
A large chunk of metal fell upon Drake's head, causing a slight scratch to appear . "Ughh…Where am I?" he said groggily.
"WE… ARE...IN....UKNOWN...TERRITORY." Anubis replied.
"How the hell did we get here?"
"HORIS…SEEMS…TO…HAVE…CRASH…LANDED."
"And we're still kickin' eh? So what do we do now?"
"THERE.... IS...ACTIVITY.... OUT...SIDE"
"Can you bring it up on the monitor?"
"NO...THIS…REGION…IS…FOREIGN…TO…MY…SYS TEM."
"Guess I'll have to check it out myself then."
Once outside, he took a look around and from what seemed like a half-mile away was a battle. Large and tall oaks blocked further viewing of the great conflict. "Hey aren't those Chryo soldiers?" he thought to himself as he examined a soldier's outfit as best as he could. But suddenly a group of medieval-like sentinels surrounded him. "It's one of those damn Chryo people!" one of them yelled. Another shouted, "Yes, yes he is! Just look at his ship!"
"Capture him!" another cried. "Wait guys I'm not what you..." but before Drake could finish his sentence, the soldiers threw a net over him and quickly knocked him out with the scabbard of one of their swords.
They grabbed the unconscious Chryonian and stacked him onto a wooden cart that was pulled by a strange, yellow bird. "We must bring him to Commander Cain. He will surely reward us for our catch!" The troops continued their ride, conversing to themselves about the battle along the way.
Chapter 2: Circa Dor, should be done in a week or so.