Thanks for the replies guys

Okay here's next part of Magikala
Tito and Hope arrive at the Moonzeal stables.
Tito: “Well here we are at the stables, where all the Escaswifts Moonzeals are kept, pretty neat huh!”
[Tito puts the sea hay on the floor. The stables were made out of that glass shiny stuff again and light blue in colour. It had this crystal like look to them too.]
Hope: “Wow..... I didn’t expect it to look like this!”
Tito: “So what did you think it will look like then?”
[Tito sits on a ledge in the stables and smiles at Hope.]
Hope: “Huh! What um well.... Um like a stable I guess.”
Tito: “Hahaha sorry kind of put you on the spot there didn’t I.”
[Tito gets off the ledge and starts to feed the moonzeals]
Hope: “You could say that........ Um Tito!”
Tito: “Yes?”
Hope: “Which Moonzeal is yours?”
Tito: “This one just here, she’s my girl.”
[Tito starts stroking Moonco]
Hope: “Oh so she’s the competition which the other girls here have to contend with huh!”
Tito: “Hahaha Yeah....... You interested?”
Hope: “What?!..... Um well...”
Tito: “Hahaha, don’t worry about answering that, I sometimes kind of like trying to put people on the spot...... Kind of a habit I guess.”
Hope: “Hmm thanks.”
Hope
Hmm I’m glad he didn’t try and make me answer it...... though in some way I wish he did....... But did he really mean it? He’s totally changed from when I first met him, he seems more nicer and full of joy.
[Just then all of the Moonzeals started to sing. (sounds a little bit like whales singing)]
Hope: “Huh!. What’s going on?”
Tito: “Wow they're all singing.... [Tito looks up at the ceiling] That must mean wild Moonzeals must be near.”
Hope: “Wild Moonzeals?”
Tito: “Yeah!.... Hey look up!”
[Hope looks up into the ceiling which is see through and you can see the glittering sea water above. There they saw a group of wild moonzeals swimming above them and singing.]
Hope: “Wow how beautiful.”
[Tito looks back down at Hope who has her back to him.]
Tito: “[In a soft voice] Yeah...”
[Hope then slowly turns round and looks at Tito, the both of them look into each others eyes which sparkle from the reflection of the water above and they both smile back at each other.
Just then the Moonzeals soon stop there singing. Tito then shakes his head quickly and then scratches the back of it like he was trying to keep awake and a little confused.]
Tito: “Um well, we’re all done here I guess?”
Hope: “Yeah I better get back to Eclipse.”
[Tito and Hope start to walk out of the stables.]
Tito: “Yeah he’s probably worried about you..... Um just out of curiosity are you two..?”
Hope: “An item!.... No just friends.”
Tito: “Oh great!.... Oh um I mean... um well I better get going... see’ya!”
[Tito hurries off leaving Hope back where they met.]
Hope
He's defintly a strange one that Tito is. I wonder if he will come with us, if he did I know the journey won’t be dull, and I’m sure he’ll cheer us up if we are ever feeling down well at least me anyway.
[You see the vision again of the young lady with black hair smiling, in the background is a burning village then the vision fades away again.
You now see Tito lying on his bed looking up to the ceiling in his room.]
Tito
Hmm going after the Terror....... If the stories are true it’ll be suicidal. But I don’t no..... Maybe I should go, but maybe I’ll just get in the way.
[Tito sits up and puts his knees close to his chest and puts his arms around his legs and starts to rest his head on them]
Tito
What’s this feeling I can feel inside me..... And this thought in the back of my mind telling me that I have to go, like its the purpose of me being alive.
[Then there is a knock on the door. Tito looks at the door]
Tito: “You can come in.”
[The doors slide open and Alan appears.]
Alan: “Are your awake? Good, because I want to speak to about something.”
Tito: “If its about that guy Eclipse you can tell him that I’ve decided to go.”
Alan: “Huh really?! Um well yes of course I know you would of come to your senses soon enough....... But I want you to come with me so I can show you something........ Well come then!”
Tito
What’s he up to now?”
[Tito follows Alan to a part of the house down in the basement.]
Alan: “Tito you’re older now and I think its time that you have this.”
Tito: “What?!”
Alan: “Open that black case on the desk and you will see!”
[Tito walks up to the black case and slowly opens it, there there is a blue bladed sword, with a colourful pattern on it. The handle was white and a bright coloured green, it also had a metal ring at the end of it. Attached to the ring was a blue ribbon and a metal chain which at the end had his Rush ball team’s logo on it.
Tito picks it up and smiles he starts to wave it about a bit.]
Tito: “Wow!... Thanks Alan, this will definitely come in handy against that Terror scum!”
Alan: “Hahaha!! I thought you would like it....... You stay safe now won’t you.”
Tito: “Don’t worry about me, I know how to take care of myself thanks to you.”
Alan: “Yeah well you better start to head off to the others, there waiting for you at the Air pods okay.”
Tito: “Right! The Air pods okay I’ll be seeing you’re, bye!”
[Tito runs off to the Air pods where he finds Eclipse, Hope and Alex.]
Tito: “Alex what are you doing here?”
Alex: “Heard you were leaving, so I thought I’ll come and join you’re.”
Tito: “Alex, its going to be dangerous, besides have you really thought it though.”
Alex: “Ha! If you really have then I would of thought it though till it has been turned inside out.... Besides I’m handy with my two swords.”
Tito: “Is it okay that he can come?”
Eclipse: “He already asked, and I said he could..... As the saying goes the more the merrier. Anyway we better start to head off, there’s two more waiting at top.”
Alex: “Two more! Wow your really getting yourself quite a party here!”
Eclipse: “Yeah well, I think we have all are own reasons why were doing this.”
Alex: “Yeah and I bet I know Tito’s reason!”
Tito: “Yeah whatever Alex!”
Hope: “What will happen to your Moonzeal’s Tito while you’re away?”
Tito: “Don’t worry about Moonco, I know that the rest of the team will take care of her and Alex’s one too.”
Hope: “You must be lucky to have friends like that.”
Tito: “Yeah I like to think so.”
[Just then a voice came out from behind them.]
Voice: “HEY BLONDE!!”
Alex: “Well what do you know it’s your old friend Kendrin!”
Tito: “Great! What the hell does he and his gang want?!”
Kendrin: “Well, well, you running away or something!”
[Tito turns around and looks at Kendrin]
Tito: “No I thought I’ll travel around and see if there is any better Rush ball teams out there, the teams here just don’t seem to be much of a challenge these days.”
Kendrin: “Hah you’re really trying to ask for it ain’t you’re Tito!”
Tito: “Whatever!”
Kendrin: “Well what have we here, a pretty new sword.... Shame it doesn’t have someone who knows what one is!”
Tito: “Grrr I can beat you any day Kendrin!”
Kendrin: “Is that a fact...... Well I except!”
[Only Tito Fights Kendrin. Tito lashes out at Kendrin but he dodges the move.
There swords soon clash and sparks fly from the blades. Tito dodges one of Kendrins blows from his sword.]
Kendrin: “Man! I thought we were suppose to be have a sword fight here not a little kiddies play of sword fighting.”
Tito: “Geez perhaps you should try fighting then!”
[There blades once again clash and sparks start to fly again. Just then Tito knocks Kendrin to the ground making him drop his sword. Tito point his sword at Kendrin's neck.]
Tito: “I win!”
Kendrin: “Dame you Tito!!”
[Kendrin gets up and picks up his sword]
Kendrin: “You might of won this time but next time you won’t be so lucky!”
[Kendrin and the rest of his gang run off.]
Alex: “Wow you showed him, not bad for a beginner!”
Eclipse: “That was your first sword fight?”
Tito: “Well kind of?”
Hope: “Well we better get going before Yasmin and Kilma start to get worried.”
Alex: “Two more girls! Wow Eclipse why on Ukila did you want us two to join you?”
Tito: “Arr come on Alex, can’t you try and get girls out of your mind for just a second?”
Eclipse: “Come on lets go!”
[They all got on to the Air pod and started heading towards Spirit Lake again where they left Kilma and Yasmin.]
To be continued........