Very Nice.
I love this bit:
Drop.. Drop.. The rain.. drops!..Tiny kisses. that seem to engulf my inner being,
making my eyes shut wearingly.
The wetness is cold yet satisfyingly warm. and it stickss to my absorbing skin like cotton.
I know that feeling.
I also like you use of Punctuation as Faile said.
It really is very good work. Well Done.
Piggle
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