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Faile · Feb 12th, 2004, 01:36 PM

Slight critique -

Spelling of insanity is wrong in the title and you don't really need every line to rhyme. For me that takes away from the feeling you are conveying in your work.

Feb 12th, 2004, 01:36 PM	#5
Faile ys. Joined: Jan 2002 Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom Age: 42 Posts: 1,137	Slight critique - Spelling of insanity is wrong in the title and you don't really need every line to rhyme. For me that takes away from the feeling you are conveying in your work. __________________ www.catherineandtheowl.com purr. miaow. hiss.