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Seasons
by
Redpyramidhead

Sicken me in the presence of a frail goat
upon an autumn crossing
Thickened thinned blood the sentence of surreal choke
upon an autumn crossing
And of its wind beautifully intoxicating
And tragically the leaves wicked and cursed
Colorfully evil and in the essence of this season


Beyond, beyond, the blood, the lies, the tears, the leaves,
could always choke on one
Beyond sickened, the love 'twas 'live, the tears, the leaves,
could always choke on one
And tragic are the leaves...
And tragically the leaves...


To glare into Death's eyes with as much fury as one could manage,
but only to sink back into one's self
And to have not the heart to express emotions of anger into the face of Death,
Her softness too powerful, as is the look of care in her eyes
Blame lay not with her...
Blame lay not with her...

Death, who is also Life

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Wow, nice work! I love that last line; it adds sort of a twist and intreagues nicely.

Yes, very intuitive, nee4life, I write songs and lyrics to those songs. If you look closely, you can sorta tell based on the structure of lines. The chorus is this part

It's all still pretty preliminary, though, as I will obviously have to do some syllable re-adjustment when I put it to the music more (it's a song in progress. I've had it on the backburner for a while.)

Actually, I'm not sure why I entitled this thread BLah...I think it was the mood I was in at the time...heh.

Thanks guyz for the feedback :cool:

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