Make the most.....
 

Another Rhymer...


Time goes on and moons pass by
the sun the stars the endless sky
it all adds up, and burries deep
the years and months and days and weeks

And endless cycle of wake and sleep
the people move as heards of sheep
so many yet so few that make
a difference in this circum shape

I leave you with this one ideal
shed the fake and hold whats real
Time is endless this is true
the difference is just what you do


MAKE THE MOST OF THE TIME YOUR GIVEN

LIVE EVERY DAY LIKE ITS YOUR LAST

Thanks man. I really dig that style of writing. Some people see it as sort of elementary. Im well aware that every line doesent have to rhyme for poetry to be good, thats just sort of how I enjoy it most. Sort of like song lyrics as you said. :)

Really cool Vicious it looks like a description of what happens with people everyday..i think it describes a vicious circle or something...as in people get up ,go thru the day then go back to bed, sometimes without even enjoying life it self..anyway very cool...;)

Ditto what Eli said!
Your stuffs so good!
If you dont want to be in the limelight yourself or you cant for some reason or other then maybe look into writing lyrics for other artists!
Rhyming or not ,it doesnt matter as long as its good, its different for each person. :)

Piggle :roll:
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Thanks for the positive feedback :)