Unfinished and Untitled

[Redpyramidhead]

Unfinished and Untitled

by

Redpyramidhead


So you can't breathe into me now
So I can't breathe into you nowww.......

yeah I succomb to myself
rape mine eyes sip fibrous milk
and drink to it in health
and eat from you in sickness
awaken all but died soaked n yet dried
to these sheets...

:::let here writhed in riddle
as you hear my meaningless drivel
no slow death is civil:::

<~ ~ ~ wither demon wither
wither and come hither
become even thinner
to dare you
to dare you
wither demon wither
wither and come hither
become even thinner ~ ~ ~>

yeah i succumb to myself
everything sore
are mine eyes
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<re-aDjust>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
sip fibrous milk
and sleep the sleep of the unjust
the gift of eternal unrest

And drink to it in health
and eat from me in sickness
awaken all but died soaked n yet dried
to these sheets...........


_RED_ stuff

[Gadzoox]

Originally posted by Redpyramidhead
:::let here writhed in riddle
as you hear my meaningless drivel
no slow death is civil:::


This whole thing is great; I particularly like that part though, but i can't say why. :)

[Rei]

This is maybe off-topic, but can I ask what's the meaning of the usage of symbols like ~~> or ::? Is it of any use indicating those part of the poems are going to be changed?