The Card House

[Sword 4 Hire]

By: S4H

A card house has been built
Built only for me
The entire deck displayed before me in such a lush demeanor
Who knew that a card house could be built in just a moment
And yet I fear it
As well as its builder
No matter how elegant the design
Its roots are still thin and its walls brittle
Do I dare enter and ruin your creation?
Your structure that you have so kindly made for my head
Will it protect me from the elements of your cold breath?
I fear not
For this house has been made with too many windows
Far too many windows
How are you able to peer through each with such finesse?
How are you able to tie a tighter hold of my leash?
My collar aches
My bones grow weak
My sanity ruptured
What would happen if I pulled the Ace of Spades from its position?
Would your card house fall upon me?
Or would you…

[Soul Angel]

Wow!
That's really good S4H, I really like the whole card thing and the words, which you have used.
It's really good, Keep up the good work. ;)

[Sword 4 Hire]

Thank you Soul

[Lost_myth]

It was brilliant.. Good sense of language and I like the whole vibe to the poem.

[Sword 4 Hire]

Thank you...eh chicken.....wire....man I'm just gonna call you myth like normal

[dan da man]

goodwork, I like the language used there, brilliant.