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Redpyramidhead
Nov 28th, 2002, 02:30 AM
Seasons

by

Mark Skinner a.k.a. Redpyramidhead


Sicken me in the presence of a frail goat
upon an autumn crossing
Thickened thinned blood the sentence of surreal choke
upon an autumn crossing
And of its wind beautifully intoxicating
And tragically the leaves wicked and cursed
Colorfully evil and in the essence of this season


Beyond, beyond, the blood, the lies, the tears, the leaves,
could always choke on one
Beyond sickened, the love 'twas 'live, the tears, the leaves,
could always choke on one
And tragic are the leaves...
And tragically the leaves...


To glare into Death's eyes with as much fury as one could manage,
but only to sink back into one's self
And to have not the heart to express emotions of anger into the face of Death,
Her softness too powerful, as is the look of care in her eyes
Blame lay not with her...
Blame lay not with her...

Death, who is also Life

copyright Mark Skinner 2002


Note: My latest song. Hope you guys like it. Too bad you can't hear how the second part is sung...I'm so happy with it. Maybe it'll be available as an mp3 someday...who knows.

Faile
Nov 28th, 2002, 07:46 AM
have you written music around the words ?

Its very good. It would be nice to hear it one day.

MakgSnake
Nov 29th, 2002, 03:11 PM
Thats some good shit my friend. Do you have any tunes on it........ its really nice!!

Ruby Moon
Nov 30th, 2002, 09:08 PM
Yes it seems good. For being a song is pretty short in lenght, but that's not a problem IMO. I like the use of repetitions at the end of the verses too.

Opalex
Dec 2nd, 2002, 12:03 AM
Is that a song?
Whoops, I thought it was a poem. I don't think it makes much difference when you read it tho.
It'd be cool to hear the musical part of it :)

LaiN
Dec 3rd, 2002, 03:50 AM
Wow, I really like it. It can be both poem and song ;) I know songs with only a few lines and this looks like one of them. Would love to hear some music to go with the song.